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HalfFormedThoughts — Sightless, unless the eyes reappear

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JOHNNYFB [2017-10-20 23:55:43 +0000 UTC]

hmm...this is so inspiring! 

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HalfFormedThoughts In reply to JOHNNYFB [2017-10-21 06:43:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much John! (and for all your likes as well)!

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reflektenlight [2017-10-20 09:37:02 +0000 UTC]

Below the clouds
In the mist
From fog so deep
These gifts

The lines are not blurred
There is no focus
The view is always the same
The light

In the confusion
Shadows dance
Upon my upon eyes
I sway

I dream
Visions
Drawn in my mind
Its paper




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HalfFormedThoughts In reply to reflektenlight [2017-10-20 18:35:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for this beautiful poem!  

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reflektenlight In reply to HalfFormedThoughts [2017-10-20 19:08:14 +0000 UTC]

These pages wet with the tears
Crumpled
I am not afraid
Of the flame


Thank you for inspiration!

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HalfFormedThoughts In reply to reflektenlight [2017-10-20 19:24:32 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure! Thank you! 

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nov1design [2017-10-20 09:08:57 +0000 UTC]

Amazing

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HalfFormedThoughts In reply to nov1design [2017-10-20 18:34:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  

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ejohanne [2017-10-20 01:15:44 +0000 UTC]

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HalfFormedThoughts In reply to ejohanne [2017-10-20 18:34:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! 

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chriseastmids [2017-10-19 18:43:10 +0000 UTC]

wonderful work Ursula

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HalfFormedThoughts In reply to chriseastmids [2017-10-19 18:43:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Heinrich!  

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chriseastmids In reply to HalfFormedThoughts [2017-10-19 19:25:46 +0000 UTC]

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KizukiTamura [2017-10-19 16:23:18 +0000 UTC]

so so so superb ...

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HalfFormedThoughts In reply to KizukiTamura [2017-10-19 16:35:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Cyril!

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KizukiTamura In reply to HalfFormedThoughts [2017-10-19 16:44:14 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Allegrinisofia [2017-10-19 15:41:11 +0000 UTC]

I just love it!

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HalfFormedThoughts In reply to Allegrinisofia [2017-10-19 15:42:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much!  

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