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Published: 2008-03-29 02:58:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 36680; Favourites: 313; Downloads: 2426
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So here's the whee lil comic from last night that I inked... blargh, it's smeared all over the place. =/Anyway... nothing's changed, I have but tidied it up a bit so that I can submit this, although looking at it now I'm sorely tempted it stuff this back under my scrap section... it's just so... smudged up. ;A;
If ANYONE out there can teach me how to ink properly, please halp. <:C
NOTE: Liek... omfg, I just realized she's missing a leg on that largest bottom panel... but I'm too lazy to fix... ;A;
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Ages ago, this was one of the first images that got me into TG AR and TF
Happy to find it again
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Thank you! Belated reply, but it's always great to hear I've had some sort of impact on people's preferences in this fandom. 
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i like this o: you should do a continuation or something. it was neat.
design was neat too, especially with the ar sequence at the bottom. Very clever way of using your panels :3
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do more or ill eat your ears off.
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maaaaaaan I wish I was good at art so i could help finish this I realy like this comic and wish I could help T_T if any one hapens to make a fine tuned version of this comic plz let me know because its just that awsome I persanaly like every aspect of it the hidden mystery man pulling the strings the character disign and the trasfromation prosess and the funny evil but funny denied altering reality ( and for those that are wondering yes i have a hard time makeing simple small chats who dosent sometimes)
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ug sorry for typos my wireless key board misses a few key is i type to fast and would have to spend so much time back tracking ment to say (pannel---but like i said it)
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wish you would work on this one again with few tweaks some color and some bigger speach area's this comic would be perfect ow i know you probly seen it already but big panne with missing leg is also missing a part of her arm on older one but lke i saidit would be awsome so see this thing revived and put to the next level
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loved the "study-induced hallucination" line here. Just the Idea of studying to the point of having hallucinations make me laugh ^^
Nice comic. She/he/it is cute in the last pannels. Will we get to the the evil mastermind with the science-ray thingie?
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Do not listen to Bad comments, its a piece of Art and I mean it, its real funny the end and me too I see it like a curse somehow and a chance to learn more about her new aspect at the same time.
Continue Your nice art works! This is your style of craft, end of the line.
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Thanks a lot.
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Rather late critique, but I like it. AR isn't really my flavour, but I tend not to look at it too deeply. Good job! Also, get to posting more stuff!
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Thank ya.
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Cool, but I have sorta the same sentiment as the guy who posted earlier... it's rather disturbing that everything this person has worked for is now nothing.
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Yeah, I know what you mean, but in all honesty I see it more as a second chance to begin life anew... point of view really.
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Ya I suppose, I was just saying. It's a great TF though.
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Well I'm glad ya at least like the TF.
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Hmm, as far as inking goes, how do you normally do it?
Do you ink over pencils, trace onto a new page, or what?
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Ink over pencil lines, and then erase the pencil, that's why it's so smudgy. >.>
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That's the way I ink, so really the only advice I can offer is try experimenting with thicker lines. It makes parts stand out better, I've found.
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LATE REPLY IS LATE.
But yes... I think I've heard about it... something about lines closer to the audience should be thicker than the ones further away... I never really tried that though. XD
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heh, i saw this somewhere else a while ago. i really like it. its a neat little prospect, and has stuff of all kinds that i like XP itd be nice to see more of this kinda thing.
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Thanks. ^_^ TFTGAR are my 3 most favourite transformation types... it's a shame they're not done altogether more often. :3
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i rarely do them combined XD
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I dunno! And that's another reason why I won't be continuing with this comic... I can't think of what to do!
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I got some ideas if you want to here them.
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What bout coloring it? Just an idea.
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Hehe, well, I'm not sure if I'll be able to since uni's been busy, but we'll see eh?
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she needs parents that what you should do his friends should be coming over or something and then poof
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Well that's certainly an idea.
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could you imagine, to continue the story of that comic?
I'm really curious, how this ends.
And, I really like it
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Thanks a lot. ^_^ I'm not really planning on continuing the story though, I kinda like to leave it to the viewer's imagination. ^_^ (THAT, and I'm incredibly lazy XD)
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I hope you'll eventually change your decision
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Personally I won't mind doing a follow up sequence to this, but eh, I spent so much time drawing and re-drawing this seq that I grew kinda scared of doing these comic lay-out sequences. X3
So yeah, in short, I'm just being lazy. :3
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oh and one more thing i partticulaurly like the two frames at the bottom left
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