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Published: 2017-01-09 18:08:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 475; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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Description blah bla blah XD

i don't feel like typing a description.
 ummmm

I wish this was better, like
omg its bad, at least worse than:
 

see that cycle is awesome , im just like
all the jelly.

Made with Free Painting Software FireAlpaca
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Comments: 41

Gyrforce [2017-01-13 04:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Very well done for practice!  Keep practicing!

The timing and rhythm seem a little off in the legs, however.  Your front legs look like they hit down at the same time.  When an four-legged animal runs, there is a circular rhythm of movement (clockwise or counter- depending) as the legs hit the ground 1 2 3 4 and repeat.  Examples: (www.youtube.com/watch?v=NuyeVN… & www.youtube.com/watch?v=vrTwZT… )  The tail (and ear to an extent) seems very stiff and could use more follow-through and secondary action to make its movement more fluid, kind of like a long blade of grass waving in the wind.www.youtube.com/watch?v=seub0o…

But the movement is very fluid (especially in the back legs) and overall the animation is well done.  Sorry if you weren't looking for a critique!

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Halo--Cat In reply to Gyrforce [2017-01-19 19:53:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^w^

That's very kind of you to take time to try and help me improve, I'll try to keep all your tips in mind.

I don't really think my animation is really fluid though, it looks rather rough to me...
No need to be sorry, rather thank you for your time
and sorry for such a late reply.

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Xorsama [2017-01-10 12:20:42 +0000 UTC]

coolll

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Halo--Cat In reply to Xorsama [2017-01-10 15:00:48 +0000 UTC]

Thaaaaanks

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Xorsama In reply to Halo--Cat [2017-01-10 17:09:32 +0000 UTC]

yw^^

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Halo--Cat In reply to Xorsama [2017-01-10 17:14:17 +0000 UTC]

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Sentient-Snow [2017-01-09 22:56:17 +0000 UTC]

Practicing? Wow

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Halo--Cat In reply to Sentient-Snow [2017-01-10 03:41:23 +0000 UTC]

yeah its bad i know.   

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Sentient-Snow In reply to Halo--Cat [2017-01-10 03:47:31 +0000 UTC]

ITS AMAZING OWO

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Halo--Cat In reply to Sentient-Snow [2017-01-10 03:49:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

I can't seem to think so.

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TheSketchQueen556 [2017-01-09 21:09:28 +0000 UTC]

This is really well doe! You did a great job with getting the proportions and I like the fuzzy marks! Cute!!

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Halo--Cat In reply to TheSketchQueen556 [2017-01-10 03:40:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you , it means alot that you people tell me i'm not as crappy as i thought ;w;

I reallly don't see how i'll ever improve.

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TheSketchQueen556 In reply to Halo--Cat [2017-01-10 15:29:27 +0000 UTC]

You will, don't worry

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Halo--Cat In reply to TheSketchQueen556 [2017-01-10 15:33:05 +0000 UTC]

its kinda sad how everyone else has more faith in me than i do
but what can i do hahahaaa ;w; 

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TheSketchQueen556 In reply to Halo--Cat [2017-01-10 15:38:25 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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Halo--Cat In reply to TheSketchQueen556 [2017-01-10 15:43:17 +0000 UTC]

lawlz

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a3skales123 [2017-01-09 20:40:13 +0000 UTC]

This is great!!!

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Halo--Cat In reply to a3skales123 [2017-01-10 03:39:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you,   I thought it was pretty bad.

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LalaNorisu [2017-01-09 19:47:28 +0000 UTC]

Nice 

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Halo--Cat In reply to LalaNorisu [2017-01-10 03:38:32 +0000 UTC]

TY

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LalaNorisu In reply to Halo--Cat [2017-01-10 03:39:01 +0000 UTC]

Np

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boredkitty [2017-01-09 19:14:48 +0000 UTC]

wow this is really good has a good cycle to it 

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Halo--Cat In reply to boredkitty [2017-01-10 03:38:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you 
 

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Icek00l [2017-01-09 18:35:46 +0000 UTC]

I think it's better. 
The only real thing that's holding it back is the lack of fine detail. 
I would love it if you could ever animate me something ;u;

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Halo--Cat In reply to Icek00l [2017-01-10 03:37:57 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I need to do that one day.I still need to find a smooth way to do that.
I don't know how to do everything on Fire alpaca yet.
like how to make a background for my animations, and put it there,
but not have to meticulously combine layers for 20 minutes.

Now that I can do, although it will still be super sketchy and bad ;w;
whatcha want me to animate for you friend?

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Icek00l In reply to Halo--Cat [2017-01-12 06:53:47 +0000 UTC]

You can make folders as layered frames.
Sure, it's a pain in the arse to sort.
But it can be done.

I have no real ideas. :v what are you willing to do?

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Halo--Cat In reply to Icek00l [2017-01-12 18:18:17 +0000 UTC]

That could work, thank you ^^
yeah that would help alot actually Thanks
soo much ^^

i have zero ideas still, but I WILL NOT 
animate people anything but that.
however i would like to try
out maybe a dragon or gryphon
which i saw in your gallery XD

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Icek00l In reply to Halo--Cat [2017-01-12 18:29:23 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, go for that! Make Boom fly. Or something! :3

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Halo--Cat In reply to Icek00l [2017-01-12 18:53:59 +0000 UTC]

on it XD

thanks for the folders tip, now i can do a proper background
hopefully
oh and color the thing
maybe idk XD

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Icek00l In reply to Halo--Cat [2017-01-12 22:42:02 +0000 UTC]

^-^

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Halo--Cat In reply to Icek00l [2017-01-12 22:58:09 +0000 UTC]

im lazy and didn't background or color
ill practice that later
cause that will make me take significantly longer to finish.

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Icek00l In reply to Halo--Cat [2017-01-12 23:08:09 +0000 UTC]

I am good at animating that kinda stuff, so a collab should be cool.
Alright! Talk to you tomorrow. I have to sleep.

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Halo--Cat In reply to Icek00l [2017-01-12 23:12:11 +0000 UTC]

kk ill be up all night like always XD

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Icek00l In reply to Halo--Cat [2017-01-12 23:13:07 +0000 UTC]

XD yeah.

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Halo--Cat In reply to Icek00l [2017-01-12 23:16:08 +0000 UTC]

video games and art
the ultimate energy sources XD

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Icek00l In reply to Halo--Cat [2017-01-15 15:32:23 +0000 UTC]

XD Very true

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Halo--Cat In reply to Icek00l [2017-01-15 23:41:24 +0000 UTC]

and wen those don't work
what do amers and artists do?

chug anything with caffeine in it
*looks at end of desk,
there sits an energy drink* XD

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LumeraLightstar [2017-01-09 18:09:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh this is cool

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Halo--Cat In reply to LumeraLightstar [2017-01-10 03:33:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you  ^^

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LumeraLightstar In reply to Halo--Cat [2017-01-10 03:36:25 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Halo--Cat In reply to LumeraLightstar [2017-01-10 03:41:35 +0000 UTC]

 

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