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SydneyStorms [2022-04-17 00:21:27 +0000 UTC]
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KinnoHitsuji [2014-06-24 15:19:26 +0000 UTC]
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Nice use of color. You used the cool blue as a counter point to the warmer red, making this picture come off as mostly bichromatic.
You also managed to get a good sense of movement and composition with an expression on her face. of surprise.
You also have good pastocity on the lines to do line control.
However, you committed the problem of boob socks
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Her dress would *not* allow for boob socks. Fabric doesn't hang that way. In the original series, despite the panty socks, they didn't do boob socks. It kinda comes off as male-centric to draw dresses that aren't intended to have boob socks that way.
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There are some reference shots. You'll see that no matter the size of the women's breasts, that there are no boob socks. Rather, the cleavage gets bigger.
Even so, Chibiusa full grown in the manga, which did have the sailors with large breasts in some cases, didn't have a cup size as big as yours.
Which to say, in summary is: use reference and don't buy into boob socks. Dress makers don't make dresses that way. And artists shouldn't draw that way either. Think about fabric mechanics--you did so for the skirt... do it for the top too.
Nice job otherwise.
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Honest-Beauty [2014-05-24 20:23:33 +0000 UTC]
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The picture overall is very good. you did an excellent job on the legs and feet, even and well proportioned. they fit well with her torso, neck, and head. The face is well done, nothing seems 'off' about it. I like how her hair is not perfect, but has a stray hair out of her right cone. Her breasts seem a little too big for the character, but that is my personal opinion, you have every right to give her big breasts.
The arm puff on her left arm/shoulder needs some work, since it is not attached to the dress at all but the right one is. I do like how you have her pulling her right one up by hooking her fingers under the top lip.
Last thing is her arms; they look way to skinny compared to the rest of her body. The length is good, just the width is an issue.
Good luck and good job!
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KanonSeaDragon [2016-08-01 15:16:57 +0000 UTC]
i love it, the stunning bod of wcked lady but with a good inners
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PrincessofEternity [2014-07-08 14:26:45 +0000 UTC]
I can see Mamoru loading his gun, and Helios and Peruru simply drooling. Love the way her skirt flows, as well as the sparkly background!
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moonkute93 [2014-05-18 04:00:09 +0000 UTC]
WOW...Talented!!! The dress looks soooo....!!! *Dreaming...*
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DragonKnight-15 [2013-11-18 02:51:42 +0000 UTC]
Our small lady growing up into a real lady of light... Usagi and Mamoru must be crying somewhere to see their daughter.
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Usako89 In reply to DragonKnight-15 [2014-06-24 15:27:37 +0000 UTC]
I think Usagi's probably crying and Mamoru's probably preparing a bat or shotgun in typical protective father fashion XD
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Water-Spryte [2013-11-12 14:23:33 +0000 UTC]
she looks beautiful. so mature. wonderfully done.
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tenshinohana [2013-11-12 13:43:00 +0000 UTC]
Magnificent! That's totally what Chibi-Usa would look like as a princess ^^
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atram95 [2013-11-11 22:10:55 +0000 UTC]
Your draw is Magnificent!! Congratulation I love it!!
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