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HaloBlaBla — Let Me In pg 05
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Mmm mm mm. What I wouldnt give to be in Ichigo's position right now.....
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Oh those legs...
Also, sorry for being a prick here, but the last bubble could use some grammar improving on the last sentence. 'Remember' shoud be followed by the object it refers to (in this case, 'that') and 'guy' is a really weird vocative to use in the end of an imperative sentence--I highly suggest another nickname or something instead.
I hope I wansn't too boring. And this doujinshi looks like it'll be really good so keep it up okay?
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O M G
*heart attack from the hotness*
LOVELY
naughty things coming up
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I like it... but you forgot the tattoos by Grimmjow's eyes. Oh well 
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Not a problem
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Errr....there's a huge grammatical error on the last panel, it's almost hard for me to comprehend. Do you mean Grimmjow doesn't like it when Ichigo doesn't look at him when he talks OR he doesn't like it when Ichigo stares at him when he talks?
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My English so so so bad :cring: Grimmjow doesn't like it when Ichigo doesn't look at him when he talks
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Or "It pisses me off when you don't look at me when I'm talking."
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Awww, don't cry! D:
Oh, I see...then I think it should be "I hate it when someone doesn't look at me when I'm talking, remember that". It's quite a long sentence but....*looks thoughtful*
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I have already corrected))) Honestly, thank you)
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Haha, Grimmjow that perv
What could he do with Ichigo??
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