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Sabaene [2011-11-05 04:06:56 +0000 UTC]
Mmm mm mm. What I wouldnt give to be in Ichigo's position right now.....
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SpicyBleachedHead [2011-11-05 00:29:54 +0000 UTC]
Oh those legs...
Also, sorry for being a prick here, but the last bubble could use some grammar improving on the last sentence. 'Remember' shoud be followed by the object it refers to (in this case, 'that') and 'guy' is a really weird vocative to use in the end of an imperative sentence--I highly suggest another nickname or something instead.
I hope I wansn't too boring. And this doujinshi looks like it'll be really good so keep it up okay?
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Wandering-Heartbeat [2011-11-04 22:32:31 +0000 UTC]
O M G
*heart attack from the hotness*
LOVELY
naughty things coming up
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Vaerin7 [2011-11-04 20:42:38 +0000 UTC]
I like it... but you forgot the tattoos by Grimmjow's eyes. Oh well It's still great!
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Vaerin7 In reply to HaloBlaBla [2011-11-04 21:07:06 +0000 UTC]
Not a problem They were still really good!
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blackstorm [2011-11-04 20:36:28 +0000 UTC]
Errr....there's a huge grammatical error on the last panel, it's almost hard for me to comprehend. Do you mean Grimmjow doesn't like it when Ichigo doesn't look at him when he talks OR he doesn't like it when Ichigo stares at him when he talks?
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HaloBlaBla In reply to blackstorm [2011-11-04 20:39:49 +0000 UTC]
My English so so so bad :cring: Grimmjow doesn't like it when Ichigo doesn't look at him when he talks
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blackstorm In reply to HaloBlaBla [2011-11-04 20:53:34 +0000 UTC]
Or "It pisses me off when you don't look at me when I'm talking."
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blackstorm In reply to HaloBlaBla [2011-11-04 20:51:42 +0000 UTC]
Awww, don't cry! D:
Oh, I see...then I think it should be "I hate it when someone doesn't look at me when I'm talking, remember that". It's quite a long sentence but....*looks thoughtful*
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HaloBlaBla In reply to blackstorm [2011-11-04 20:55:43 +0000 UTC]
I have already corrected))) Honestly, thank you) My grammar errors just awful! Necessarily correct me so I can fix it))) I hope you is not hard to do it?
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miiChaneko [2011-11-04 20:34:02 +0000 UTC]
Haha, Grimmjow that perv
What could he do with Ichigo??
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