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Published: 2014-07-12 17:59:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 270; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description
these are my first human adoptables.I will take
-Points
-Other adopts
-customs
-art
also i would appreciate some critiques on them to.
1-open
2-Crumbtea21
3-open
4-open
base by CheekyCherriPie
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Comments: 11
I love number two! I'm kind of strapped for points right now, but i can give you two points for her.
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sure thing these never sold so i'm just happy some one wants one
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Sending the points right now!
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I don't know why nobody wants them. They 're just so cute
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alright c: i have a critique for you v w v:
I think they look quite lovely, but. for an OTA it makes no sense to say "i want more then 20 points" because then they are not really offering. its more like you have a set price for them...
Also, if you want people to take your adopts seriously. spelling "adoptables" correctly would be a good place to start. v w v but over all, they are cute.
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I spelled it wrong!!! oh my thank you for pointing that out!!! any suggestions on how to word it better then for an offer to adopt?
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hehe c: no problem v w v and well, if its an offer to adopt. usually that means...well. exactly what it sounds like, offering. but the best way to do it is somewhere putting a list of what you will accept. usually it is points (in which you can say no under 20) Art, and customs.
but if you only want points and want no less then 20...its not a OTA and more like a set price v w v
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Okay thank you ill re wright the description right away
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yeah c: thats alot better v w v alright... well i hope they sell! c:
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