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Happy-R — Alita Meets Ruby Page Eight
Published: 2008-08-07 00:35:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 5482; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 49
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Urgh, this comic is taking to long, I really need to put more work into it, I've just not been motivated lately and I'm geting so many requests I feel like I'm about ready to explode, anywhoo Page Eight.I'm not all that happy with this, for one I cant draw kissing to save my life, and second I dont think I've done a very good job on Ruby's blush
Ah well :s
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now why did i ever miss these hot little pages, such a hot couple lol!
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I like that kiss except for one thing (and it doesn't nothing to do with the kiss persay):
The fourth panel, with their legs, the floor and all that, I believe that it shouldn't be isolated, but a background for the whole page, and that three top panels were superposed on that bg.
This would mean to eliminate the limits of the fourth panel and that the yellow color of the wall was visualizing between the gutter of other panels.
Once done my analysis pseudo-intellectual of the ninth art 
... and sorry about my english, Its difficult for me to write so much text without committing a mistake.
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Na thank you! I've never had such a big comment! yay! lol
And you know its funny, i was honestly going 2 do that, have the door and the yellow wall under the white lines of teh panel boarders, I guess I decided not to though coz I felt fed up with the page lol
And I like the boobs too ^_^
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I think I've messed this up. I suck at drawing kisses lol
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