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VoidColor-Sans [2018-09-15 09:36:05 +0000 UTC]

Just counted "Mourning" was about 178 pages or so not counting the cover page(s), so if this chapter is much longer than that, holy moly, that is a lot/that is long, awesome!  That makes me really happy.  Cool.

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VoidColor-Sans [2018-09-15 09:10:34 +0000 UTC]

Holy, longer than Mourning, that chapter was really long, this must be really loooong then, & it will be split into acts, alright bring on chapter 6, etc, and ACT 1, & future Acts, can't wait.  While I'm okay with short, shorter chapters, I really love long, longer chapters that u like to do, & this is looking to be a long on, yes.  Can't wait to see more of Sans, Gaster, Lily, Toriel, Leander, probably Flowey/Asriel & ghost Chara later on, & maybe the 6th soul/fallen human not counting Chara, & Frisk, & all these other characters we love (esp. Sans & Gaster & his family).  Can't wait to see more cute, funny stuff, and maybe some more dark & sad stuff (though parts 1-5 already gave us so much of that), & cool, awesome, badass, etc, stuff, more fights and stuff esp. maybe with Sans (living up to his moniker maybe), Gaster, Undyne, Asgore, Tori, etc., from what I seen u can definitely do great action & fight scenes, I'm sure u do well with them, even in full color, esp. considering how much u have improved over time.  Plus, can't wait to see more of that good storytelling & see that improve even more so, & have even more of those awesome mysteries, secrets, hidden stuff, & have answers to mysteries both old & new.  Anyways, your storytelling/pacing can be a little slow, but I thinks it works for u, with ur emotional & impactful kind of storytelling (can't for even more feelings, though I'm scared as well). Anyways, ur way to telling a story has improved, I'm sure that & everything else will keep on improving.  I'm also wondering on how & why Sans & probably Gaster as well, will remember, etc. with the resets, saves, loads, timeline, time traveling shenanigans, just how he will know, remember, how they/he will try to respond to it/fix it/use it, I can definitely see Gaster wanting to try to use it, anyways I'm just really interested in how ur AU of Undertale & u will go about handling this esp. considering all of the interesting changes, & the characters will probably have to deal with Flowey/Asriel resetting, messing with stuff before Frisk, so yeah, can't wait  Anyways, it seems HopeTale will be in full color from now on, it makes sense, since all the other parts were just the prologue, and this is the true start, still holy moly with that.  Anyways, can't wait for that, ur colored, full colored stuff looks great, & while I really like ur black & white with splashes of color, tad more detailed, manga style of previous chapters, the full color still looks great, and like manga, & keeps true to the coret of ur art style & character designs for this comic, & it is looking great, & I can see a lot of improvements, can't to see more improvements all around, like with ur full colored art work (plus I just like color, full color a lot).  Though, I can see starting now, the true beginning of HopeTale, not counting the prologue is a lot more colorful, light both in appearance and tone, and I don't hate that, it works with what u are trying to do, bringing light & hope to ur AU like the name suggests, esp. after the darkness the prologue was, but still great.  Plus Sans looks surprisingly good in pink, & Gaster in light purple.  Anyways, lets do this, let's start reading this chapter and act more, I can't wait for more chapters & acts & etc. in the future for this AU, HopeTale, for hopefully a while to come (& other works which I'm sure are great) both prologues, special chapters, main chapters, etc., & in black & white (with splashes of color every so often, a lot) & in (full) color, anyways lets do this I love all ur updates, but remember to pace ur self, k, done, I think.

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Fransriara [2018-07-24 11:53:03 +0000 UTC]

I realize that this is Asriel's hand because of his nails, but where is his fur?

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PrimeYggdrasil [2018-07-09 05:01:58 +0000 UTC]

Hints at flowery and chara

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Phuindrad [2018-07-08 10:05:00 +0000 UTC]

So Evil Girl and Psycho Flower come back to kick Gasters ass?

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KurroKiri [2018-07-07 19:58:27 +0000 UTC]

That long?! Well I'm already super excited. Best of luck!

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Zhexiel [2018-07-07 18:43:19 +0000 UTC]

Already want to read it.^^

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samgunjr [2018-07-07 15:39:37 +0000 UTC]

If this is going to be a long chapter, please stay determined! Btw you deserve more appreciation for your works

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Hezault [2018-07-07 12:12:22 +0000 UTC]

so long you had to cut it into acts huh?
Must be really long....I wish you the best of luck

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