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The heads too big and one hand got messed up in the inking process... I know. But in very proud of the kimono i think its very pretty! This is for the alternative clothes contest (My first admission. I'm not very confident with it but i still like it a lotI dont own Naruto. Duh.
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needsMOARshin [2011-07-18 16:55:27 +0000 UTC]
I love how airy and light this is. Maybe try working on softening up some of the lines a little? I mean that in places like the hair; the ends are a little bit spiky and overall could probably do with looking like they are blowing in the breeze. The kimono is wonderfully done though, and I love the style of the trees. They aren't so detailed that they take away focus from the character. Overall, you're doing really well though, so keep it up ^^
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HarlequinChild In reply to needsMOARshin [2011-07-18 17:11:51 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the advice and the compliment in my more recent pictures the lines aren't as harsh. and I'm continuing to improve THANKS
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Purplecherry5 [2011-03-05 21:24:52 +0000 UTC]
If this didn't have the double elbow, I'd tell you is was almost perfect
The colouring and design makes up for it; they're super cute!
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HarlequinChild In reply to Purplecherry5 [2011-03-06 12:57:33 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
damn that double elbow >
I didnt notice it till the color was already there.
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GabrielleReid [2011-02-27 21:23:34 +0000 UTC]
THIS IS SO PRETTY! I, RANDOM STRANGER, LOVE IT AND AM JEALOUS OF YOUR SKILLS.
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HarlequinChild In reply to GabrielleReid [2011-02-28 17:53:14 +0000 UTC]
Lamo who double posts.
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GabrielleReid [2011-02-27 21:23:34 +0000 UTC]
THIS IS SO PRETTY! I, RANDOM STRANGER, LOVE IT AND AM JEALOUS OF YOUR SKILLS.
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HarlequinChild In reply to GabrielleReid [2011-02-28 17:53:02 +0000 UTC]
Ahhhh WHO ARE YOU??? Thanks gabby
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fdfgfgf13 [2011-02-26 07:48:44 +0000 UTC]
u did good but the arms r...erm..long but u still did good especially with the coloring
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HarlequinChild In reply to fdfgfgf13 [2011-02-27 19:26:48 +0000 UTC]
yess ik i already said i wasnt especially proud of the anatomy but i was real proud of my coloring >.<
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dazza1008 [2011-02-25 23:40:47 +0000 UTC]
Ah! Very intricate! And you've even got... dirt at the end of the sleeves! (j/k)
Here is 1 point for this entry as a small thank you.
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smudgechan [2011-02-25 19:22:14 +0000 UTC]
I have to say, I am very impressed with the kimono--the pattern seems well thought out and the colors are gorgeous. Both composition and pose were well-chosen, lending this picture a bit of a surreal feel to it (I'm reminded of 16th-century Dutch portraits, which I hope you will take as the compliment it's intended to be). My only concrete suggestion is that you watch out for where the body goes in the kimono--one of her arms looks as if it has two elbows due to its unusual positioning. Your elbow normally hits at the level of your belly button when the arm is at rest, so that might be something you want to remember when you're setting out her limbs. Overall, though, I have to say that I don't usually click on fanart but this is a nice piece. Good job!
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HarlequinChild In reply to smudgechan [2011-02-25 19:40:52 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!
Especially the tips they are very much appreciated! And i do take it as a compliment
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