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doo090 [2014-04-30 04:25:08 +0000 UTC]

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Okay dude, y'know I love you and you're work, so don't be mad at me. XDD

Now, this is a very lovely piece showing some flow with the lighter objects in the picture, but with a very static and stiff pose, which doesn't make much sense in my opinion. Perhaps you should experiment with a slightly more dynamic yet elegant pose for this character, if you ever draw her in the future. I would love to see that!

As usual, your skill and technique with the brush stokes is AMAZING as usual, but like I mentioned before the issue both you and I share, is lack of shadow definition. To be specific;
- Between the legs, tail, and body, and the tail coming out from behind her left leg.
- Between the arms and dress.
-Between the leaves in the background and the dress.

These areas could use some more dark shades to differentiate them and create more depth. Also, a little bit on the shoulders and under the hair, and the vest (unless it's tight, I can't tell) could use a little shadow too.

However, I see you've improved and followed that with the areas with a bit more depth, such as the neck, lower arms, and legs coming out from under the dress.

This piece has a bit of symmetry going on in it, which is offset by the hair, flowers in the back, and leaves here and there; but they're mostly on the right side, which throws me off a little. The left side feels quite empty. Also, the concentration of the small leaves on her legs seem a bit too uniform, so adding a few more in farther or closer spots would add a little more variety.

Overall, still a wonderful piece with a wonderful character with an artists with a bunch of wonderful ideas. :3 That is all!

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Mishberries [2014-05-02 06:56:51 +0000 UTC]

Your style is so unique and the concept of her species is so pretty o.o How can you come up with THIS when you have nothing to draw holy crap o/ I love her character design and the colours that you've used for her and that innocent expression of hers is priceless! Superb job done!

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robert2715 [2014-04-30 22:28:39 +0000 UTC]

it looks wonderful I like your design!!

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Art-Eli [2014-04-30 08:53:45 +0000 UTC]

that's so cute! i love the style and your paint job, great work

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ArtsUnlimited [2014-04-30 05:23:34 +0000 UTC]

This is really cute! ^ ^

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doo090 [2014-04-30 04:57:45 +0000 UTC]

FFF MY CRITIQUE HAS A TYPO I DID'T CHECK FUUUU

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doo090 [2014-04-30 04:26:12 +0000 UTC]

Also, your new sig is AWESOME! It's so fudging... I can't even! XDD It's way better than mine, to say the least. XDDD

Also can I draw fanart of her? But please explain a few parts of her to me if you want to XD;;

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doo090 [2014-04-30 04:11:02 +0000 UTC]

I kind of just went

"WOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH" when I saw this ;;7;; (with a hoarse voice- I just got up a few minutes ago XDD)

DUDE THIS IS AMAZING A-A-AND RIDICULOUSLY CUTE LOOK AT HER FACE

At first I thought her hair was in a kind of loop thing some anime characters do, but then I realized that she was whipping her hair back and forth it was just flowing to the side. XD;;;

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houshikaze [2014-04-30 02:25:32 +0000 UTC]

Moved to the featured folder of . Wonderful use of brushes and colours to bring out the character in that background. Very professional, and very high quality work.

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namiirin [2014-04-29 20:52:08 +0000 UTC]

omg so pro * A *

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OginArt [2014-04-29 19:33:06 +0000 UTC]

Lovely!

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RMolinas [2014-04-29 17:17:21 +0000 UTC]

Awesome Job! : )

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Kerri5 [2014-04-29 13:24:00 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful painting!

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Miine28 [2014-04-29 13:11:46 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful

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