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Hawklier — Mako ref -EBC- _Update_

Published: 2012-07-30 03:10:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 4025; Favourites: 51; Downloads: 15
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Description
Through the wind and the rain
He stands hard as a stone
In a world that he can't rise above
But his dreams give him wings
And he flies to a place where he's loved
Concrete angel

Somebody cries in the middle of the night
The neighbors hear, but they turn out the lights
A fragile soul caught in the hands of fate
When morning comes it'll be too late.


General Information

What can be found here
Name, Gender, Age, Species, Traits, Rank, Accessories.


Name:
Mako
Mako was originally known as “Jupiter”, a name given to him by the humans whom previously owned him, and used he and his brother as entertainment animals. After they escaped, they took the names they remembered their parents had given them before their capture.

Gender:
Male

Age:
1 year
Mako first joined the Empires at the age of 6 months, and for a good portion of his life after he became a part of Lightning Empire, he was raised by the Gladiators and other cats there.
At 9 and a half months, he was captured by the Bounty Hunters, and has thus spent the last 2 and a half months a captive in the City, being brainwashed to work for the Hunters as an apprentice.

Species:
Cheetah( Acinonyx jubatus )
Mako is a pure Cheetah, born in the heart of the savannah to two proud cheetahs whose names he can’t remember. Their mother had the same silvery blue pelt her children had, but their father had the typical golden cheetah colors.

Traits:
Dominant Traits:
Slender build [AA], amber eyes [Aa], thick scruff [Aa]

Recessive Traits:
Chinchilla mutation [AA], green eyes [Aa], Heterochromia [aa]

Carrier Traits:
Ticked mutation [aa], stocky build [aa], brown eyes [aa]

[[Note: Carrier Traits cannot be seen. They are the combinations that could have been but weren’t]]

Rank:
Apprentice
When Mako joined Lightning Empire, he had been nothing much more than a small cub with big dreams. But he grew quickly in the positive environment, and eventually became of age, and finished the requirements needed, to become a full-fledged apprentice in the Empire he loved.

However, before this could be realized and made official, he was taken by the Hunters. He’s currently an Apprentice in the city; but much against his will.

Accessories:

A black arm-band given to him by a human when interest was shown.




Personality, History, and Quirks

What can be found here
Personality Traits, Background Information, Interesting facts, and Character Quirks


Personality:
<[ Prideful, ambitious, decisive, laid back, pensive, playful, fierce. ]>

<[ P r i d e f u l ]>


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<[ A m b i t i o u s ]>


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<[ D e c i s i v e ]>


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<[ L a i d b a c k ]>


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<[ P e n s i v e ]>


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<[ P l a y f u l ]>


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<[ F i e r c e ]>


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History:

<[ To know what a gift is ]>


For the first month of his life, Mako was born side by side with his brother Tsinga, and raised by two loving adult cheetahs in the wild African savanna. Their mother had the same snowy blue and silver gray pelt, and their father was the typical color for a cheetah. Their first few weeks weren't that eventful, only consisting of their mother's love and father's visits. They were proving that they would one day be strong adult cheetahs to be white-blue blurs on the golden savanna- But soon more and more humans began populating the plains that their parents had called home.

Eventually, during a hunt- their parents were killed by human poachers; their mother for her pelt, and their father as collateral damage.

It took a few minutes, but eventually the two cubs, because of their pelts, were spotted in the long grass. Chirping for their parents and crying because they were hungry, and it wasn’t long before they were taken as well. The humans whom had killed their mother and father saw better profit in selling them alive rather than pelts, and were sold off to foreign travelers as pets.

For the next four months, the cubs lived a relatively safe life. The humans they were sold to were entertainers from Rome, traveling and teaching small animals how to earn them money and make a living. They bought the two sibling cubs because of their unique coloring, and after naming Mako as Jupiter, and Tsinga as Mercury; taught them how to pretend fight each other in comedic ways to impress and entertain their customers.

Once or twice Mako (then Jupiter) was put into real fights in low ranking coliseums, pitted against another cub to test their strengths. These first battles weren't to the death, but many times a cub came away fatally wounded and later died from his injuries. Luckily, Mako was never one of those cubs, and had never tried to cause such serious injuries. Mako’s brother, being the more reserved and docile of the two, was never put into the fights for fear he would be killed.

This lifestyle continued for about a month until the brothers’ humans’ received a special message.

<[ Loss must be experienced ]>


During their fourth month of life, Mako's owners were sent for by the Emperor himself, requesting this growing tale of two snowy colored cheetahs who could perform acts and plays that had not been previously taught to cats of their rarity.

Soon, Mako and his brother were packed up like common objects, and quickly began traveling across the country side to the most well-known and largest coliseum, located in the city of Massilia.

However, along the way, a strong thunderstorm hindered the travel of their caravan, and the humans had been forced to make camp in a shallow dip in the land along the road, throwing a thick cover over the rickety crates that held their two prized cubs.

Later in the evening, when Mako and his brother Tsinga had been fed their nightly meal- a caravan of thieves raided their camp, brutally killing their humans, and stealing everything they could find within a moment’s notice. During the chaos, the cubs crates has been knocked to the side and burst open upon impact with the ground. In their shared panic, they had lunged through the woods and across the plains, still bearing their human-given accessories, and fled into the night before the thieves could kill or steal them as well.

Eventually the two brothers were found by a mysterious lightning bolt clad patrol, and were taken back to their camp. There they were allowed to join the strange cats, who they came to know as Lightning Empire, and from there, were finally able to let out their inner wild cats. They eventually remembered their real names- Mako and Tsinga, and took their names back in memory of their lost parents, despite their faded memories of them.

For a long while, they lived a happy life in Lightning Empire, learning the ways of their Empire-mates and gaining respect for the Gladiators that taught them, and new friends. In their young eyes, nothing could get better about their lives, and soon they would cast off the final pieces of their captive life that were their neck and headbands.

One dark, overcast night would bring the end to that peace.

<[ Though sometimes we lose too much ]>


At nine and a half months of age, and so very close to becoming a Gladiator’s apprentice, there was a deadly raid on Lightning Empire’s heart and home. Cats whom smelled of foul humans had rushed into the camp, and as Mako woke and crawled towards the opening of the Nursery nest, a monstrous black-stripped white tiger barreled into the camp and snatched the cheetah cub right from where he had lain comfortable and happy moments earlier.

Without mercy, the tiger had shaken and thrashed the cub until he wailed and cried for help from his Empire-mates, being taken farther and farther from his home into a large, forest encircled clearing now feared by Lightning Empire Gladiators.

The cub’s cries had earned no response save for a single Gladiator, whose name was Dehlia. The rest of the Empire had rushed to the immediate defense of the sleeping Apprentices, leaving Mako to be tossed to the ground and brutally crushed beneath the tiger’s large paw. Barely enough relief was given between the paw and the ground to keep Mako from being killed, he struggled to hold onto consciousness, the shock and dizziness of his sudden capture and assault drawing a shadow of darkness over his vision.

If you asked him today, he could probably –and reluctantly- tell you that all he could remember from the night was pain, fear, and darkness. He had been kicked across the clearing and into Dehlia, the Gladiator whom had chased after the monster of a tiger to protect him.

Gaining four new scars along his chest, Mako had awoken minutes later in the chaotic atmosphere of battle, surrounded on all sides by Hunters and Gladiators. Scared and confused, he had followed the only scent and pelt he recognized in a desperate attempt at safety. The pelt was that of Abiola, the previous leader of Lightning Empire, and a cat Mako looked up to like a hero and a father figure.

But his instinct to follow the elder cheetah turned out to be his worst mistake, and he was there to witness the Leader’s murder at the paws of a Lynx known as Scaeden. For this, Mako’s mind snapped in a way that may never heal, and he shot forward while ignoring his wounds, screaming in denial in a futile kamikaze towards the Hunter’s leader. Barely with any effort, Scaeden had managed to subdue and scoop up Mako’s wounded body in his mouth, and took off, leading his Hunters away from a victorious battle.

Mako doesn’t remember much after that.

<[ But time goes on… ]>


For two and a half months, Mako was the victim of everything the City had to offer an ownerless, rare-pelted feline. There had been contemplation of skinning him for his pelt, but the four scars left by Kallen, the white tiger whom had kidnapped him in the first place, quickly made that option inadequate for profit to the humans.

It was quickly decided that he would be given to the Hunters, and he was quickly thrown into the low ranking pit fights, having been expected to be nothing more than training fodder for the hunters-in-training.

However, Mako’s early life training in the small time coliseum fights for money proved useful in this, and in his fragile state of mind, was vicious in protecting himself from the cubs who attacked him, earning him a surprise spot in the Hunter’s actual ranks to replace a young apprentice he had killed during one of these outbursts.

Taken under the wing of Scaeden, the Hunter’s leader himself, Mako has been fed lies and foul information of the Empires to the point where he’s unsure what is truth or lies at this point, and is currently serving the City as a Hunter Apprentice.




Interesting facts:


Mako’s original human given name was “Jupiter”

Mako is rather small for his species, considering his mutation.

Mako and his brother share the mutation “Heterochromia Iridis”, but with reverse colored eyes.

Mako and Tsinga are twins and share many similar pelt traits.


Character quirks:


Mako has a habit of chewing, and can often be seen with a small toothpick-like bone sticking out of his mouth.

Mako has a fascination with birds and likes to watch them in his free time.

He’s a bit of a show off.



Training, Mentors, Apprentices, and Armor

Past Training Experience

Entertainment fights:
When Mako and his brother were small, they had been taught to ‘fight’ each other in comic and exaggerated ways. Because of this, he’s a little over dramatic in his moves, but has an unorthodox way of dodging and striking that my come as a surprise to Gladiators or Hunters.

Low-ranking coliseum fights:
After Mako had grown up some, his old human trainers had entered him into sub-par coliseum fights to earn extra money for the caravan. He learned quickly, and did his best to win; without giving fatal injuries to his opponents.

Empire Lessons:
Early in Mako’s life in Lightning Empire, his friends and seniors had humored he and the other cubs his age by teaching them minor maneuvers such as a shoulder roll and dodge.


Past or current Mentor(s):
Human NPC
The human trainer of the Hunters oversees Mako’s training, and is the one to bring him into the training arena.

Scaeden
Scaeden acts as Mako’s ‘unofficial’ trainer, and is the one responsible for Mako’s growing doubt towards the Empires.

Armor:

Blue-dyed leather protection.

Flexible metal chest plating.




Relationships

What can be found here
Family Relations, and Empire Relations.

Family:

--- Lineage:


Mother:???//
Status: Deceased

Father:???//
Status: Deceased


--- Siblings:


Brother:Tsinga/
Status: Alive

--- Current and past mates


Current mate:None ” :bullet---:/:bullet---:
Status: ---

Past mate:None ” :bullet---:/:bullet---:
Status: ---


--- Offspring


---:None ” :bullet---:/:bullet---:
Status: ---



Empire relations:

Color key:

= Neutral
= Friend
= Close Friend
= Crush
= Love (Non-romantically)
= Love (Romantically)
= Dislike/Hate
= Family/Mate
= Jealous
= Respect
= Past apprentice
= Current apprentice


Bounty Hunters


Scaeden = /
"I hate him so much. He’s the one who killed Abiola, and raided Lightning Empire with the rest of his thugs. But…
I’m not sure what to think anymore. Some of the things he says… I can’t help but realize that they might be true, and I don’t know if he’s right about how… “bad” the Empires are… I respect him, I guess, for his strength."

Kallen = /
"If there’s one thing my life has taught me, it’s that the only cat I could ever want to willingly kill is Kallen."

Lightning Empire


Abiola = /
"Abiola… I miss him. I know that of all cats, he would be the one who could tell me what’s true and what’s a lie. Ever since I had joined Lightning Empire, I looked up to him for his strength an ability to lead the Empire. Some of the other Gladiators saw him as irresponsible, and maybe he made mistakes… But I’ll always see him as my hero."

Dehlia = //
"Dehlia was a great gladiator! I had always respected her, ever since I met her. She knew all about how to hunt and to fight, and she was fun to talk to. She even promised to take me out hunting when I became an Apprentice-!....
She’s probably dead now… I don’t know. I wasn’t allowed to know how many of my past comrades were killed, or who they were. I guess it’s okay to admit now that I think I had a little crush on her.
*sigh*"

Sarius = /
"Sarius had been my first friend in Lightning Empire. He didn’t act like I was just some dumb cub, and actually stuck around to talk to me. He taught me how to shoulder roll, and how to use it in combat too. I wish I knew if he was alive and okay."

Tsinga = //
"Tsinga is my brother, and the only cat I could ever be sure if they were dead or alive without actually being told. I know he’s still out there in the Empires, and I miss him so much, and I know he’s probably losing all his fur with worry… I love him as any brother would, and he’s one of the reasons I want to get out of here!
*Growls and stamps paw, going silent.*"

Cheino = /
"I wasn’t even all that old when I met her, and even I thought she was annoying. I still feel sorry for Marcellus and Accalia."

Marcellus = /
"I never officially ‘met’ him, but I respect him for standing up for Accalia when she came to Lightning Empire. I understand a little better now than I did before, and I know it was brave of him to do what he did. I wonder if he’s still alive?"

Accalia = /
"She was kind to me when we first met, and I remember she had been really nervous about joining Lightning Empire. I remember saying some things about how I didn’t understand what the big deal about her being a (former) hunter was, but now I think I do. I respect her for having the courage to escape like she did, and I hope maybe I can pull off the same thing. I hope she’s alright after… that."

Fire Empire


N/A = :bullet---:/:bullet---:
"---"


Air Empire


N/A = :bullet---:/:bullet---:
"---"


Ice Empire


N/A = :bullet---:/:bullet---:
"---"


Shadow Empire


N/A = :bullet---:/:bullet---:
"---"



Plots and Prophecies, Wanted Status, and Empire Points, and a Roleplay example.
What can be found here
Stories about or related to the character, this character’s wanted status, Empire Points and drawing records, and Roleplay Example(s)

Ongoing stories and plots:
Mako has been captured by the Hunters!
He’s currently being brainwashed into believing the Empires are truly at fault and had never cared about his wellbeing. Will he escape, or be forced to submit to the mind-bending force of the City life?


CAPTURE STATUS:

Mako is an Apprentice, and is not allowed to capture any cats yet.

==> Collective coins are --- gold coins.


Empire Statistics:

Stealth: 2
Intelligence: 10
Strength: 10
Defense: 4
Speed: 10
Stamina: 4
Total Empire Points: 40 EP


Example Roleplay: (Taken from an actual roleplay in the Fire Empire Blog)

Icy blue hues watched intently from the shadowy foliage above, the tip of his bobbed tail flicking ever so subtly with a mixture of amusement and fatherly anticipation. Watching the young felines below him move about carefully, using their wits and knowledge to try and locate him without so much as a hint. It was gratifying to the lynx, knowing he was responsible for their upbringing as Apprentices and Gladiators.

As he watched, they continued to test the scents of the forest around them, checking under bushes and even occasionally looking upwards- it was smart of them. He had given no indication of his location, but they knew enough to check the territory of the air as well; it would serve them in the future should Hunters or, perhaps even another Empire, decided to ambush them from the high branches. Surprise and numbers were the two weaknesses of a Gladiator, and not being aware of every direction would surely be the death of an unsuspecting cat.

Shadow's words whispered their way into Soren's ears, and he perked them forwards, feeling a warm glow of satisfaction that the cub already knew enough. He wasn't dumb on catching the swallowed name that the lion almost uttered either, and a melancholy shadow flitted over his heart for a moment. Koda would have been a brilliant mentor for Shadow. But what has passed is done, and there is no turning back. Mentally hardening himself, the mahogany colored leader moved his paw to a more comfortable spot. If one of the Apprentices were to climb up to get a better look, he'd surely be found.

"Prey comes in many shapes and sizes, Alynnia." He answered her, his voice ringing with a soft laughter that could just be heard.

Thoughts and words distracted Soren from the single motion of his paw he made, and he silently cursed as he rustled a small swatch of leaves beside him. They would have heard that for sure- he'd have to think quickly to cover up his amateur mistake.

A few birds fluttered through the branches a few lengths away, their twittering songs echoing slightly in the soft breeze that rustled the leaves even further up than where he lay. Mentally he noted that their presence would be a good cover for quick solution, and he quietly shifted forward, grasping a newly budded green pinecone carefully between his teeth. With a last glance downwards, he tossed the pinecone towards the far end of the small clearing, opposite of the direction he wanted to go.

As it hit the grass and dry leaves with a thud, Soren tensed himself in preparation of climbing his way to a different area.

He wouldn't let these younglings find him that easily.-




MASSIVE UPDATE HOLY SHIT

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© Character/Art = ~Hawkrend

Special thanks to =DappledSun for allowing me to use her own format to make my own.

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Comments: 24

xSenkai [2013-09-02 01:37:37 +0000 UTC]

I'm going to make a note of rping with this guy sometime TTuTT lovely character, that song fits him well, even if it's sad, but inspiring as well

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annabellethesqueaker [2013-07-16 16:51:48 +0000 UTC]

Lovely! Simply amazing! I love the backstory, especially how he came to join the Hunters. Looking forward to rping on the blog! 

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Hawklier In reply to annabellethesqueaker [2013-07-17 00:51:28 +0000 UTC]

Mako has been a part of EBC for a while LOL. He's only recently gotten an update to his history and age. 

And thank you very much. <3 He'll hopefully be in the blogs soon. c:

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annabellethesqueaker In reply to Hawklier [2013-07-19 17:10:46 +0000 UTC]

Haha I know :3 I was just loving how it was all perfectly connected and such

Hopefully! 

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YazukyYuu [2013-02-27 09:14:19 +0000 UTC]

Your designs are fantastics!

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Hawklier In reply to YazukyYuu [2013-02-27 21:19:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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YazukyYuu In reply to Hawklier [2013-02-27 21:22:22 +0000 UTC]

You very welcome ! >w<

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TheOneWhoLovesToEat [2012-07-30 11:47:47 +0000 UTC]

Mako? Too bad you already have a fire empire character xD He looks awesome :3

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Hawklier In reply to TheOneWhoLovesToEat [2012-07-30 12:02:18 +0000 UTC]

Haha, his name wasn't really pulled from TloK xD Thank you though. <3

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TheOneWhoLovesToEat In reply to Hawklier [2012-07-30 12:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh... :C
but you're welcome xD

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Hawklier In reply to TheOneWhoLovesToEat [2012-07-30 12:38:33 +0000 UTC]

I do love Mako from TloK though~ ;D

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ZeroTiger7 [2012-07-30 05:44:43 +0000 UTC]

Both of their designs are so cool. Let me know if you ever want to rp with Hyperon.

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Hawklier In reply to ZeroTiger7 [2012-07-30 05:53:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. c: And alright!

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ZeroTiger7 In reply to Hawklier [2012-07-30 20:24:13 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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WrathoftheNeko [2012-07-30 05:16:36 +0000 UTC]

Hey now!!! Ya'll took my mutation!!! lol jk! cute charrie... Hmmmm Orik wants to be related.

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Hawklier In reply to WrathoftheNeko [2012-07-30 05:21:55 +0000 UTC]

Didn't mean to. xD

And sorry! Mako and Tsinga aren't really open for new relations atm. D:

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WrathoftheNeko In reply to Hawklier [2012-07-30 05:25:39 +0000 UTC]

lol i know i just find it funny that they are all in lightning empire. Orik is much older than them lol. If they ever open up to new relations i think it would be great for Orik to be an older brother that they all never new they had! It would be a great story.

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Hawklier In reply to WrathoftheNeko [2012-07-30 05:35:55 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, but we really don't want them to have any relations inside the empires. :\

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WrathoftheNeko In reply to Hawklier [2012-07-30 05:38:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh Ok. It is your choice. Thought it would be cute.

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Lefa-59 [2012-07-30 03:31:26 +0000 UTC]

AWSOME CHARACTER

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Hawklier In reply to Lefa-59 [2012-07-30 03:54:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Lefa-59 In reply to Hawklier [2012-07-31 00:52:38 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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RatsNScraps [2012-07-30 03:11:30 +0000 UTC]

adorable!!!!!!

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Hawklier In reply to RatsNScraps [2012-07-30 03:13:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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