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Description
BiographyName-Doku Zassō
Age-17
Gender-Male
Species-Poison
Symbolized-Yes
Pack-Origin lies in the Dark cities
=>Pack position-Member
Status-Alive
Family--Lobelias(sister)
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Information
(With Sister)
Doku was only 8 when his village was attacked by the shadow clans. Luckily Most of the Poison groups managed to cheap the shadow clans at bay long enough for a majority of there young to escape. Doku and his sister Lobelias were on the run from the shadow clans for a long time before they met Kane. After joining the ghost pups Doku voud to make the shadow clans pay for what they had done to the dark cities.
Doku has always been very protective of his sister witch has often cased him to take unnecessary risk to cheap her safe. Now not only dose Doku take theses risk to protect his sister but to also protect his friends.
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Name inspiration
Name means Poison in Japaneses.
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Theme song => Adelitas Way - Still Hungry
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AzureHowl poison species belongs to www.deviantart.com/azurehowlsh…
Song www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xb-BAw…
Base www.deviantart.com/alffis/art/…
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Comments: 7
He looks pretty cool! ^^ Some advice for you though.
1. You said he was 10 when his pack was attacked, but then you state he is 17. This is inaccurate at the attacks happened 9 years prior to the current events in the show, which would mean he would be 19 if the attacks happened when he was 10. If you want him to be 17 years old, I suggest changing him from being 10 to 8.
2. I hate to break it to you, but being good with poison would not make him chosen for Group Leader, ESPECIALLY if he comes off as cold and rude, or takes unnecessary risks in certain situations. This is not how Group Leaders are supposed to act. In fact, that attitude would make him a very bad candidate for leadership. I suggest revising his personality or changing the role you would like him to have. I also don't suggest writing a backstory purely based around the rank becoming a commanding one as there's no guarantee he'll get it, even if he gets accepted. I instead suggest tailoring it to match a different rank or leaving the rank open to be chosen by Shilach, though suggesting that you would prefer whatever rank you desire.
3. I don't think you're supposed to enter both your entries as siblings...
4. Using direct translations for names is against the rules as Shilach wants the names to be unique. I highly suggest renaming him.
I hope this helps! ^^
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Thank you for the advice.
This is the first time I've ever done something like this and I do agree his sheet needs work.
As for the name I know Shilach sead no translation but onastly I'm bad at cumming up with names, and now I've grown kinda attached to Doku.
(Side Note) If some parents named there son Mutt when he's from the Mud Spieses I wouldn't put it pasts for some parents to name there kid poison in another language when he's from the Poison Speises.
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It's no problem! First times are always at least a bit bumpy! ^^
Alright, I suppose I was being a bit harsh on that one. It does kinda come off as a real name possibility when you think about it, so I'll drop that one. 
Fun fact: Mutt's name is actually an alias and not his real first name. So I wouldn't rely on that as a source when naming your wolf
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I relay do apprisheat the advice it will help me for next time.
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