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marble-v [2013-03-21 10:19:13 +0000 UTC]

I've been late in write my comment though, I was very happy to drawing for Marion's TF fan comic and seeing Liam's coloring work again

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multi-comics [2013-03-01 14:50:22 +0000 UTC]

good one, really enjoyed it, and damn that coloring is awesome..

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shatteredglasscomic [2013-03-01 14:37:55 +0000 UTC]

The art is super!! (It's Rui Onishi. She is always awesome!!) Most of the time I only positive, but this time I see an error. Correct me if I'm wrong.

The text in panel 4 isn't correct, I think. Englisch isn't my first language, but I think it's wrong. I think it the word "after"should be left out. Now I get the impression some words are erased.
(and indeed, Perceptor talks different. )

But I love the end. Good lines!!

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pittstop [2013-02-28 07:42:49 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, sorry but Perceptor doesn't speak like that. He was always characterised as using "big words", so expressions such as "almost and open and shut case" seem way out of character. I'd have been inclined to use a phrase like "This investigation would appear to be margining on the obvious." And "we cannot link him to the crime as we cannot find the murder weapon", again too simple, something like "Establishing a correlation between the suspect and untimely demise of the victim has proved arduous to verify considering our inability to locate the weapon utilised in the despatching of the victim."

Might have been better to use one of the police car TF's like Prowl or Streetwise.

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hellbat [2013-02-28 07:35:17 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done.

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ToaNaruto [2013-02-28 05:22:49 +0000 UTC]

Very clever use of a Targetmaster. But wouldn't the little bot have left footprints anyways?

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