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Published: 2005-08-01 23:28:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 238; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 8
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On the first day of school I met my teacher who happened to be a guy and was anything but, shy. During class I would stare deep into his eyes and after school that day he caught me by suprise.He asked, " Are you in love with me? " I answered yes but, you see we are both guys.
He grabed me and looked dead into my eyes. And he started to cry let's just give it a try.
After that I didn't have that long to wait because, the next day we started to date.
It was hard because, we were both guys but, it got even worse when I lost my eye's.
I went blind during in accident at my job. And at the hospital I started to sob.
He said it was alright even if you can't see he would still be with me.
He started to teach me how to cope. And then I knew there was still hope.
One day as I sat at his house it turned eight this frightned me because he was late.
Then I heard him and my father talking. Then it was either runinng or walking.
My father screamed you didn't kill him like I told you to. That's why I payed you.
My teacher said he couldn't do it see he said he really fell in love with me.
All my mind could say was why untill my father said then you will die.
Then I heard the noise of a gun. To the door I started to run.
As I ran in the rain I started to think this is insane.
Once I reached a body I bent down to feel as soon as I touched the person I knew the wounds would never heal. The man was my teacher I knew it how could my father do it.
I could feel the specks of blood on his face as I thouhgt my father was a disgrace.
Then I felt the bullet hole in his head and I knew he had to be dead.
I swore that day my father would pay.
One year later my father was found dead
from a single bullet through the head.
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Comments: 14
heartsofchains In reply to mr-bear [2006-04-06 00:26:34 +0000 UTC]
right did i spell dat wrong....nah
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heartsofchains In reply to hotaru-yami [2005-08-04 00:25:57 +0000 UTC]
I know but, it is one of the best things I have ever written and I am glad it came out just like I wanted it to. So did you think it was good.
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SufferingAngel [2005-08-02 20:30:43 +0000 UTC]
Wow...... Very powerful.. O.O Amazing.. You're right.. I love it.. I'd love to see more prose out of you~~
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heartsofchains In reply to SufferingAngel [2005-08-02 20:52:09 +0000 UTC]
Really thanks! I will try to do more but, it took me awhile to do.
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