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LIGHT MODEWhen you look at them you blush and smile in a funny way
you can tell that you have been thinking of each other all day.
When you hear thier voice it's the most beautiful sound.
You know it's your soul mate you have found.
You buy them gifts to see them smile
and you know they will be thinking about you for awhile.
You dream about them as your lying in bed.
They are the only one that fills your head.
You smile at them everyday and hope they will see
that you and them are meant to be.
DARK MODE
Mind splitting.....Wrist slitting
thoughts go through your mind.
Love was the only thing you had wished to find.
What do you do when the one you love doesn't notice you?
It makes you sick the way they act like they don't have a clue.
What they don't know is they are driving you insane
for scraping at the heart is by far the worst pain.
You but them things hoping...you..they will never forget.
Just remember after a few moments they won't remember shit.
You know how you sit at the phone waiting for them to call
but in the end thier not thinking of you at all
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Comments: 15
mr-bear [2007-06-30 04:21:48 +0000 UTC]
Very nice poems Krisha, you do express the two modes quite well. Very nice job, I can relate to both as well. Ah....
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heartsofchains In reply to mr-bear [2007-06-30 16:28:30 +0000 UTC]
Thankies....Many can relate to both but are confined to one.....^^ I am glad you liked it....So did you read my other one
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heartsofchains In reply to mr-bear [2007-07-02 00:14:00 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.....did u dislike it?
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hotaru-yami [2007-06-18 16:49:11 +0000 UTC]
Yet another poem I can relate to!!! I like it a lot! I can't write poems to save my life (Though storys are a breeze... )
I know the feelings in both light and dark mode quite well, and I found myself nodding to them...
Well written as ever!
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heartsofchains In reply to hotaru-yami [2007-06-18 17:25:03 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I know I wrote those when I were going through those modes...I think I try to look at things as light mode most of the time but sometimes you know *snap* ^_^
I am glad you liked it. I can't write a story if my life depended on it.
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hotaru-yami In reply to heartsofchains [2007-06-18 23:55:35 +0000 UTC]
lol I guess we all have our own talents and a sense of balance.
Yeah, I try to look at life through light mode myself, but there really is the odd time where you find yourself seeing nothing but a vast dark abyss that threatens to swallow you whole...
I've only been working on the long series of storys my friend and I are doing so I'm pretty wordy at the moment...
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hotaru-yami In reply to hotaru-yami [2007-06-19 10:16:40 +0000 UTC]
yeah, I have to try go through all the different emotions my characters experience too.. writing in any form is hard don't ya think? Though it's VERY rewarding once you get it done and feel happy with what you created...
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heartsofchains In reply to hotaru-yami [2007-06-19 00:02:10 +0000 UTC]
So I see...All I have is my poetry so ya know going through every emotion helps me.
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1Sky-1Destiny [2007-06-18 03:55:39 +0000 UTC]
^^
I could never write a poem...
I had to though in my enriched-English class :/
I'm just not good at it XD
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heartsofchains In reply to 1Sky-1Destiny [2007-06-18 16:25:41 +0000 UTC]
Every class I take always says were gonna skip poetry this time.Lucky u...I bet you could to write.
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heartsofchains In reply to 1Sky-1Destiny [2007-06-18 00:14:11 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I am sure glad ya liked it ^_^
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