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Published: 2005-07-14 16:59:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 391; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 2
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Description Love is the things I do.
All of them just for you.
Love is that looks in in your eye's
that would show that you could cry.
Love are the words I say
to you every single day.
Love is when I hear your voice
and when you you say hey it's your choice.
Love is when it's just you and me
or when you carve are names into a tree.
Love is when we go out
and all we do is run and shout.
Love is when we hold hands
as we lay on the beach sand.
Love is when no matter how far
we'll love each other where ever we are.
Love is when if I say I have fear
you say you will be hear.
Love is when I know you care
and when we know each other will be there.
Love is when I am gone
you promise to move on.
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Comments: 18

PhoenixG [2006-06-02 18:46:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh nos.....my heart hurts....*fights back a tear* You have a gift Krisha....you aren't COMPLETELY crazy....

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heartsofchains In reply to PhoenixG [2006-06-03 00:47:47 +0000 UTC]

Tank u

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Sunchild-sama [2006-06-02 16:07:35 +0000 UTC]

It’s hard for me to define what I think love is, but it’s nice to hear someone else’s view.
I feel the last few lines are agreeable. (That’s me anyway!)

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Sunchild-sama In reply to Sunchild-sama [2006-06-04 04:49:22 +0000 UTC]

So true!

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heartsofchains In reply to Sunchild-sama [2006-06-03 00:54:42 +0000 UTC]

I know I missed some things but it waz hard to put my def of it down Last lines are to true

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hotaru-yami [2005-07-17 14:32:22 +0000 UTC]

You got it really close to what love is... there's a few bits you didn't include for a full picture, but still it is a beautiful and touching poem that I agreed with the whole way...

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heartsofchains In reply to hotaru-yami [2005-07-17 15:09:43 +0000 UTC]

I know I could have added more.

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SufferingAngel [2005-07-14 18:05:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. I actually teared up when I read this.. It's beautiful.. I love it...

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heartsofchains In reply to SufferingAngel [2005-07-14 18:11:35 +0000 UTC]

Really! Wow! Well I made it for you so I hoped you liked it. When I got done talking to you last night and worked on it. It took me a long time because I wanted to make it as close to perfect as I could.

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SufferingAngel In reply to heartsofchains [2005-07-14 18:16:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!! X3 I loved it so much... You're so good at poetry; you know how to describe the emotion well. I think I'll work faster on your 'picture' so that way you'll see it faster! Yay! Btw, it's about 86% done. Maybe even a little more.

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heartsofchains In reply to SufferingAngel [2005-07-14 18:33:28 +0000 UTC]

You really think I'm good. I don't know about that Don't work to fast.

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SufferingAngel In reply to heartsofchains [2005-07-14 19:00:53 +0000 UTC]

I don't just think, I know! X3 You keep up the good work, you hear?

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heartsofchains In reply to SufferingAngel [2005-07-14 19:13:45 +0000 UTC]

THANKS! I will.

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Aquira-chan [2005-07-14 17:57:06 +0000 UTC]

!!!!!! Nice poem!!!!

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heartsofchains In reply to Aquira-chan [2005-07-14 18:02:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Aquira-chan In reply to heartsofchains [2005-07-14 18:12:07 +0000 UTC]

*points to comment by S-A* or not...nvm...XD

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Aquira-chan In reply to heartsofchains [2005-07-14 18:11:20 +0000 UTC]

^-^ your welcome.. hey..have you heard from S-A lately? she has'nt been on yahoo..

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heartsofchains In reply to Aquira-chan [2005-07-14 18:13:30 +0000 UTC]

I talked to her yesterday but, not online.

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