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Published: 2005-06-28 01:00:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 233; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Love it deals with the heart.Why do such a thing.
Why bother with such an emotion.
Life is short, so why even start.
Could this be a dream.
Or is this real.
This life has so many emotions that I can't feel.
My heart belongs to the darkness.
Could it get any worse...
The light could save me but...
I can't reach something so far away.
Should I try.
I whish I could cry.
My life has a way to go.
But, it is so close to the end...
I can touch it.
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Comments: 17
Sunchild-sama [2006-06-02 15:36:19 +0000 UTC]
Good input of how we may not try everything in our life. That’s a deep thought that I’ve often thought of. It’s like no one really thinks of this until they die or are close to death.
That’s my view anyway!
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Aquira-chan [2005-07-01 14:41:37 +0000 UTC]
Nice poem~I don't really think there's anything wrong with it though...
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Aquira-chan In reply to heartsofchains [2005-07-01 16:52:50 +0000 UTC]
^-^ If you need any help with poems or something just ask me
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heartsofchains In reply to Aquira-chan [2005-07-01 16:56:56 +0000 UTC]
Really cool. I may write one today but, brains not working. I have some pics to put up but scanners not working.
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heartsofchains In reply to Aquira-chan [2005-07-01 16:56:18 +0000 UTC]
Really cool. I may write one today but, brains not working. I have some pics to put up but scanners not working.
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Aquira-chan In reply to heartsofchains [2005-07-01 16:59:17 +0000 UTC]
lol..that sucks...*reactivates your brain* there ya go
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heartsofchains In reply to Aquira-chan [2005-07-01 17:02:46 +0000 UTC]
I don't think it worked. It's broke because suffering angel hit me in the head to hard when she jumped on me at Wild Adventures.
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Aquira-chan In reply to heartsofchains [2005-07-01 17:05:02 +0000 UTC]
lol,yeah I heard about that "crazy adventure" XD
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heartsofchains In reply to Aquira-chan [2005-07-01 17:14:11 +0000 UTC]
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Aquira-chan In reply to heartsofchains [2005-07-01 17:16:50 +0000 UTC]
O.O;; um....o...kay then....
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heartsofchains In reply to Aquira-chan [2005-07-01 17:33:34 +0000 UTC]
Sorry if I scared you
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Aquira-chan In reply to heartsofchains [2005-07-01 17:37:00 +0000 UTC]
Nah,u did'nt scare me...do u know how to make blinkies in PSP?
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heartsofchains In reply to Aquira-chan [2005-07-01 17:39:56 +0000 UTC]
blinkies? Psp? I'm so confused
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leikosuzuka [2005-06-28 19:27:58 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the comment on my journal. i like this poem and i can really relate to what you might have been going through when you wrote it.
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