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heartsofchains — The Stars
Published: 2006-07-24 23:25:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 376; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 7
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Description Everynight when I look up at the sky
I always begin to cry.
Because when I look up at space
the stars create a picture of your beautiful face.
And on that clear midnight
oh how I wish you could see this wonderful sight.
I know even though your gone I shouldn't frown
for I know your looking down
at me from the sky.
But I can't stop crying no matter how hard I try.
I remember when we use to lay in the grass looking at the sky.
We would do all those cute things like create pictures and belive we       
  could fly.
Me and you loved to look up there
we would lie there all day with out a single care.
We would look at the stars and how brightly they would shine.
You said intell they stopped you would be mine.
They don't quite shine the same way since you died.
But then again I may just not be able to see through the tears that I've
  cried.
You always told me the best part about passing on was that you would
  get to touch the stars.
And that you would be close and never far.
I hope you get to do what you said
for thats the only good reason your dead.
I tied this poem to the foot of my bird
and I hope the words I write will be heard.
Three weeks later
my life became ten times greater.
A bird came back with another letter
it made everything so much better.
It said I got your letter this is the one you love
So I sent one back on this pretty white dove.
I know with out me it's hard to to
but I want you to try and make it through.
And there is just one favor I ask you
to do.
I want you to look high up in the sky
And try hard not to cry.
Look deeply into space
and you will see my smiling face.
I LOVE YOU
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Comments: 27

SufferingAngel [2006-11-23 15:40:59 +0000 UTC]

Aw, it's so pretty! Very awesome, Krishna!

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heartsofchains In reply to SufferingAngel [2006-11-26 23:31:56 +0000 UTC]

I like this one alot...Thanks

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mr-bear [2006-09-16 02:27:44 +0000 UTC]

damn your poem Krisha

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heartsofchains In reply to mr-bear [2006-09-18 01:19:09 +0000 UTC]

....yea

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mr-bear In reply to heartsofchains [2006-09-19 23:14:28 +0000 UTC]

NO I didn't mean it in a bad way I meant it in a good way! This poem is Awsome!!!

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heartsofchains In reply to mr-bear [2006-09-24 22:31:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Kingdomheartsgamefan [2006-08-30 22:38:02 +0000 UTC]

such the cutest poem <333 >.> i must have xDDD j/k

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heartsofchains In reply to Kingdomheartsgamefan [2006-08-31 01:10:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!I work real hard on my poetry ^_^ I hope u enjoy em

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Kingdomheartsgamefan In reply to heartsofchains [2006-08-31 04:34:28 +0000 UTC]

okies <333

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ElGatito [2006-08-24 23:43:06 +0000 UTC]

~cries~ sad, but nice ending!

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heartsofchains In reply to ElGatito [2006-08-24 23:43:48 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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BlossomZ [2006-08-24 21:25:24 +0000 UTC]

Soooo, sad but good!!
Ummm... you put lookimg instead of looking^^
Nice!
Bloss~Z

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heartsofchains In reply to BlossomZ [2006-08-24 21:28:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks...I did urg I will have to fix it. I type real fast so. I am working real hard on my poetry thanks.

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BlossomZ In reply to heartsofchains [2006-08-24 21:49:30 +0000 UTC]

Your Welcome^^
Yup, your poetry is really nice
(10 things about your art in your journal and tag your friends)
Already tagged my friends now I tag u!!^__^
Bloss~Z

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hotaru-yami [2006-07-30 09:22:44 +0000 UTC]

so beautiful!!! You're such an amazing poet!!

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heartsofchains In reply to hotaru-yami [2006-07-30 23:51:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I don't think I am all that talented but thanks. I have art to put up to but dumb scanner is broke

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hotaru-yami In reply to heartsofchains [2006-08-02 18:17:29 +0000 UTC]

Gah, my scanner is evil too, it's not broken, but it's killed all the cool work in shading that I did in a colour pic, this is why I want a tablet, but I can't afford one and worst of all, I'd deal with my mouse if it wasn't one that had a will of it's own.... (pant pant)
I'm looking forward to you being able to put some art up. ^^

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heartsofchains In reply to hotaru-yami [2006-08-13 23:27:15 +0000 UTC]

I know this is late sorry I waz out of state.... Yes crazy scanners...I need to get a new one to. I will be getting some art up soon trying my best to finish some pics ^_^

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hotaru-yami In reply to heartsofchains [2006-08-15 11:59:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh, same here! I got a graphics tab (FINALLY!! :woot: ) and need to do up some lines. I still have an art trade to finish too...

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heartsofchains In reply to hotaru-yami [2006-08-15 21:07:14 +0000 UTC]

seems like ur busy

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hotaru-yami In reply to heartsofchains [2006-08-19 12:25:24 +0000 UTC]

Totally...

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Little-Saiyan [2006-07-25 00:58:24 +0000 UTC]

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heartsofchains In reply to Little-Saiyan [2006-07-25 01:57:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh I didn't want u to be sad..... Did u like it waz it bad or somethin... *hugs* be happy

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Little-Saiyan In reply to heartsofchains [2006-07-25 13:38:59 +0000 UTC]

It's just purdy... *sobs* So true and relevant...

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heartsofchains In reply to Little-Saiyan [2006-07-25 13:59:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I think.....so u like it..... I worked real hard on it and I love how it turned out ^_^ *hugs* Don't cry

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Little-Saiyan In reply to heartsofchains [2006-07-25 15:13:52 +0000 UTC]

*clings* I like it very much.

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heartsofchains In reply to Little-Saiyan [2006-07-25 16:11:11 +0000 UTC]

Okay well ur welcome and if u ever want another one just tell me

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