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Published: 2005-06-28 16:23:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 166; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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There once was a man who went to the middle of his town and started to brag about his heart. And all the pepole soon gathered to listen. And the man said, " I have the most beautiful heart in the world." And all the pepole agreed for his heart was smooth and had no ridgesΒ Β or tears. The man said no one had a better heart then he. And up came a boy who said, " My heart is better." All the pepole turned to see. They saw a heart with rips and tears. The heart was not smooth at all. How can you say that your heart is better than mine. Just look how many holes are in it. And the boy answered. My heart may not have all of it's pieces but, even though some may be bad the holes remind me of all the things that have happened in my life. They also remind me of the pepole who I gave part of my heart to. The man stood and thought about this for a while and then told the pepole the boy was right. The boy had reminders of his life and the man did not. The boy told the man that it was not to late to start. They each tore a piece of there hearts out and gave it to each other. And walked away side by side.Related content
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There is some misspelling in there. Otherwise, this was quite genuine!
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I have bad grammar and lazy too!
Incredible they made me the school paper editor in grade 5!
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I hate lang can't spell to lazy sometimes I will fix them. Tanks
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Beautiful... I love this story so much....
Btw, this should be put under 'prose', since it's not a poem. I'd put it under Fiction, then Philosophical. 
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I know it's good. But I wasn't sure what to stick it under and I was being lazy
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U r very creative!
^^
Did you come up with this by yourself?
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