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Published: 2014-03-11 16:50:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 438; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 1
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my unit from fire emblem! she has my name and i second sealed her to a dark flier- i maxed out all her stats too.. im so proud of her :''''')Related content
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There's good detail in the outfit and hair, however the face and head seem to be off kilter. Good line work by the way!
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thank you so much!! yeah, i agree with you- her neck also seems too long?? and offset from her shoulders. but thank you for your comment!Β
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Neck length isn't too much of a problem, but I definitely see it offset from the shoulders now that you mention it.
I just checked out some of your other work, and you've got a similar problem with your knb piece. Everything else looks really nice though
Keep these in mind when you're doing your next piece and let's get better at drawing together, fellow Homestuck!
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ah thank you so much!! it's nice to get feedback
i definitely will! Β thanks again.
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You're welcome! Tbh, I wish more people would give me feedback too
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ikr?? often i find on this website it's more just favorites. which is still great, dont get me wrong! but it sucks that the critique option is only open for premium. (which is a little silly to me, cause somebody could easily just replicate the process in a comment)
if you like, i can always give you feedback on your pictures! just give the word
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If you're willing, that would be lovely! There's already a lot that I know I need to work on and with the rate that I draw progression tends to be slow
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sure!! just give the word anytime and ill take a look.
anything in particular that you want me to look at??
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Whatever suits your fancy, really
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