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Published: 2004-08-29 21:52:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 90; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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I hope you're left aloneThe way you made me feel.
It is colder than an ice picture,
Now let your skin fucking peel.
The glass bubbles and bursts;
Falls onto your cruel chest.
This feeds my thirst
I send you to loneliness.
Here none can dwell
But you are deserving.
Watch as your features pop and swell,
Stir up demons as they're dining.
The glass bubbles and bursts;
Falls onto your cruel chest.
This feeds my thirst
I send you to loneliness.
Thick is your skull,
Thicker is your soul.
I knew you could kill,
Now it's your turn to stammer and pull.
The glass bubbles and bursts;
Falls onto your cruel chest.
This feeds my thirst
I send you to loneliness.
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Comments: 12
JackLeaf [2004-08-30 11:13:25 +0000 UTC]
Haha you must be angry
Well, I find it rather good, expect that in some places where you have used full stop a comma would do better. This is my opinion anyway.
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hellishfluff In reply to JackLeaf [2004-08-30 12:31:08 +0000 UTC]
Yes, and of course your opinion is always welcome.
It is a song though....
It has a rhythm of its own. Commas are overrated psh! Just kidding. Thank you!!
.:Stefany:.
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joseishijin [2004-08-30 02:10:58 +0000 UTC]
very good, i hope it isnt me, i'd be terrified if someone wrote that about me
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hellishfluff In reply to joseishijin [2004-08-30 02:17:36 +0000 UTC]
Haha no it isn't about you! You never hurt me. Thanks for the comment!
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kayalishous [2004-08-29 22:01:56 +0000 UTC]
steffy that was awsome. i love it. very well writen
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hellishfluff In reply to kayalishous [2004-08-29 22:05:15 +0000 UTC]
Wee! Thank you, I'm very pleased with it too. I'm so egotistical about my writing.
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kayalishous In reply to hellishfluff [2004-08-29 22:19:15 +0000 UTC]
hehe. that sounds like you.
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