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Published: 2004-03-31 14:31:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 112; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description Rain falls,
Slow but hard.
I wonder
Does it hurt?
Rain to me,
Is the sky weeping.
The sky asking for comfort.
My tears fall
Fast and easy.
I know it does hurt.
Tears to me,
Is my soul ripping, exploding.
My soul asking for comfort.
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Comments: 9

VML [2004-04-23 22:31:46 +0000 UTC]

this poem makes me wanna hug you!

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hellishfluff In reply to VML [2004-04-23 22:54:14 +0000 UTC]

Aww.. thank you for all the comments!

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VML In reply to hellishfluff [2004-04-23 22:56:55 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome!

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Dragontmr511 [2004-04-01 03:19:36 +0000 UTC]

I really liked this, i was hopin to read it agian ^^ very good job!

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the-true-beast [2004-03-31 21:01:22 +0000 UTC]

Short and to the point.I love it.

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dragongirl15 [2004-03-31 20:04:31 +0000 UTC]

luv it

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hellishfluff In reply to dragongirl15 [2004-03-31 21:56:41 +0000 UTC]

why thank you. Ehehe. THANK YOU ALL!

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Supy [2004-03-31 17:49:48 +0000 UTC]

very nice.

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JackLeaf [2004-03-31 14:56:14 +0000 UTC]

Short but nice, very nice. Good job.

^_________^

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