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Fight. Scream.Compose. Investigate.
Fight old dead latex....
And scream absurd black ink.
Compose red art by honest thought;
Investigate sleep almost like empty rhythms.
Impossible. Clever.
Words. Wonderful.
Impossible times held highly-
Clever the clouds seem soaring, tantalizing;
Words reach stars that sympathize,
Wonderful our system seems.
Kill. Rainbow.
Breaking. Hearts.
Kill the mocking bubbles,
Rainbow colors all but genuine-
Breaking teeth hurts me more than you...
As hearts are mangled without fail.
Scoff. Rupture.
Finesse. Participate.
Scoff at the shoe which fits;
Rupture insides on feeble heels-
Finesse apparantly exists on radical impudence,
Participate as wellbeing for others is overrated.
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Comments: 19
JackLeaf [2004-11-25 08:31:00 +0000 UTC]
I can't really take much of it, but I like the way how you first listed single words and then made a verse with them. x)
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TeknoDeathVirus [2004-11-24 04:27:16 +0000 UTC]
wow, i really love that, reminds me of skinny puppy lyrics but makes a lot more sense... thanx for adding me to deviant watch! its very rational you call yourself a self porclaimed genius!
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hellishfluff In reply to TeknoDeathVirus [2004-11-24 04:29:26 +0000 UTC]
Hehe!! Thank you very much!!!! WOO!
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hellishfluff In reply to xsilentxscreamsx [2004-11-24 01:25:46 +0000 UTC]
*raises her eyebrows a bit*
Thank you! A fave is nice ^^
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xsilentxscreamsx In reply to hellishfluff [2004-11-24 02:47:07 +0000 UTC]
Oh yesh.
't "moved" me.
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Dragontmr511 [2004-11-23 17:57:54 +0000 UTC]
that is sooo awsome! EEE!!!! i miss you guys, and i dont have your new number, whats up? note me back
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kayalishous [2004-11-21 23:20:09 +0000 UTC]
wow steffy. a little confuseing. but i liked it anyway. maybeone day it will make sense to me.
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joseishijin [2004-11-21 16:20:16 +0000 UTC]
i like it...parts i understood and others just seem too nonsensical at the moment
Kill. Rainbow.
Breaking. Hearts.
Kill the mocking bubbles,
Rainbow colors all but genuine-
Breaking teeth hurts me more than you...
As hearts are mangled without fail.
i like that part the best though, everyone can tie a meaning to it. like sara got a broken relationship, and i feel the pain of a lost loved one and probably for you it means something different
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hellishfluff In reply to joseishijin [2004-11-21 18:26:57 +0000 UTC]
Yah, I sort of had that feeling too with that part. Thanks.
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Supy [2004-11-21 06:03:26 +0000 UTC]
my comp is really messed up and wont let me talk to people a lot or else ill get kicked off but im here if you wanna talk
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Supy [2004-11-21 04:43:26 +0000 UTC]
very nice!...i understood it fine. awsome use of words stefany
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hellishfluff In reply to Supy [2004-11-21 05:09:29 +0000 UTC]
Heh thanks Supy.
You aren't talking on AOL..whyy..
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dragongirl15 [2004-11-21 04:41:11 +0000 UTC]
very interesting and you were right i made barely any sense out of that. i think that the 'kill. Rainbow. Breaking. Hearts.' section might have been about breaking up with Chris or some other form of breaking up with some one or them breaking up with you....am i right? ....no clue on the rest though....
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hellishfluff In reply to dragongirl15 [2004-11-21 05:10:10 +0000 UTC]
No....not about breaking up. Bigger losses you know. Heh, thanks
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dragongirl15 In reply to hellishfluff [2004-11-21 15:12:52 +0000 UTC]
oh ok i get it. you're welcome.
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