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Here it is! About 6 - 7 hours of work put into this!Enjoy!
i like fan art.
Echostar (c) HelloFeesh ONLY
I used multipl brushes from people, i'll put them up later when i have more time
lol
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alex5657123 [2010-01-01 02:43:36 +0000 UTC]
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Not bad, but I do see a lot of problems in this picture
For 1, In the Anthro picture, the eyes are to far apart, The smile is nice but the mouth goes up to far, and is to wide.
The ears are OK but but it seems like theirs no edge to the other side of the ear kinda like Allikatnya's Old style or if you know what I mean XD
The legs are good, I like them and the way you can see the knees, but the tail seems a bit to long and thick, plus when it gets close to the butt, tails tend to get thinner/smaller
One other thing about both pictures, the bang bug's me
not in the way I don't like bangs but it seems to long and you can't REALLY see through bangs or hair, nor eye lines or even eye brows.
The hand are good and so is the shading/fur plus the lighting is great ^^
Ok the normal cat one
Well besides the ears that I already pointed out, the front limbs are a tad bit thick, and the shoulder blade doesn't really follow a cats bones, it just seem like the bone to your elbow is gone (Because cats have them to you know?) The back legs are fine but the front is a bit to big
The hip and stomach come in to fast and the cat seems to skinny, mostly between the points of the hip and shoulder
The front arms again.. they are too long, mostly the back Left one but the back legs are a bit more even
Also same thing with the tail as the Anthro bit, and the butt comes up a bit to much on it also
So ya thats about it sorry if I overdid it but hey I'm just pointing it out
SO...
The background, is pretty well done in the feral one, and the grass is good, most people just put in a bunch of blobs of grass or something XD
I love the mountains and clouds but I don't know if you just copied pasted it like the buildings XD
but the star's are fine and the patching between the "feral" and "anthro" is really neat :3
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HelloFeesh In reply to alex5657123 [2010-01-01 02:54:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the Critique!
Lots of thought put into it! XD
lol my style was based off AlliKatNya's style about one year agoo, so thats where the ears came from
For the tail, i shouldve added a overly long and fluffy tail to the description because thats one of her traits, a huge tail XD
yeah, i see what you mean for the eyes and hair, it makes sense, but i do the see through hair thing because sometimes if i didnt do that, you wouldnt be able to see the eyes at all, and i love to see the eyes of characters, plus shes cartoony, so ya XD
the feral kitty anomety is off, so thank you for pointing out the flaws so i can work on them
Oh yes she is very skinny, i guess i did that so no one would say 'the cat looks fat' XD
the buildings were actully a brush, but i had edit some stuff out to make it fit on the little anthro half XD
thanks again!
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alex5657123 In reply to HelloFeesh [2010-01-01 03:06:17 +0000 UTC]
OMG, thanks for not fliping out on me (like that other person) XD
It was a bit to harsh but thanks for taking it good, I pretty much pointed out everything their is possibly so if your able to fix some of that your drawings would be really good : D
so ya thanks again XD
And sorry I didn't know the buildings weren't copied-pasted o3o
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HelloFeesh In reply to alex5657123 [2010-01-01 03:08:26 +0000 UTC]
LOL oh, i have freaked out before, when i was a n00b XD XD
your welcome!
lol its okay XD the original brush was really a building picture someone just turned into a brush XD XD
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alex5657123 In reply to HelloFeesh [2010-01-01 03:22:03 +0000 UTC]
ROFL Building brush XD
Well I hope I can get that brush one day... but I don't have Photoshop or Gimp so that's a fail
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HelloFeesh In reply to alex5657123 [2010-01-01 03:23:41 +0000 UTC]
LOL XD
lol Gimp is free, try downloading it, i dont use it tho
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AnimeAnimalGirl [2009-12-23 02:47:44 +0000 UTC]
awsome i love it!!!!!!! i wish i could draw so i can draw my warriors OC ur really good. oh yea read my story plz---->[link]
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