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hellostrangeone — Believe Me
Published: 2009-11-24 22:15:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 110; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description how much is gone
how much remains

I know how to
make this stop
but then I can't
keep you lover

make the uptake
just take a
little faster
and I'll see straight
- make myself believe
this would ever pain you
before I was
already gone
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Comments: 6

noobwriter [2009-11-27 12:06:44 +0000 UTC]

I think this is my favorite.
Short, sweet, and loaded.
Well done

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hellostrangeone In reply to noobwriter [2009-11-27 21:48:29 +0000 UTC]

your faaaavorite? wow.

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Pathos1987 [2009-11-27 08:41:01 +0000 UTC]

very nice! the rhythm of the stanzas flows well throughout the piece. are these lyrics to a song of yours, perhaps?

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hellostrangeone In reply to Pathos1987 [2009-11-27 21:48:10 +0000 UTC]

these aren't lyrics...yet!

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findxme [2009-11-26 05:19:44 +0000 UTC]

I send you a hug.

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hellostrangeone In reply to findxme [2009-11-27 03:36:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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