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Published: 2010-01-19 00:45:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 183; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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girl, should've watched yourselfin this swamp
standing in the mold
and you jumped right in
without any arms, any brains
to get out
baby girl, should've known yourself
better than that
but instead
you pushed yourself down
just to watch it
eat you up
like a sewer
soaking up shit
all there is to see
are the mistakes
floating among this
hell-covered mess
the sunlight
can't reach you here, girl
exactly what the disease
wanted to counteract
you're buried now
only to find that
the filth is feeding
your escape plan
pay attention, because
I'm running out of words;
I'm running
out of time
Comments: 5
Pathos1987 [2010-01-20 22:18:18 +0000 UTC]
there's some awesome imagery in this--the second half, especially, does justice for the poem's title. a wonderful piece = ]
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