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hellostrangeone — Disjointed
Published: 2010-03-15 01:15:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 118; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description realize your naivety
and i'll realize
my false
sensibility

those reasons to
crack my heels;
melting steel into
the ground

has there ever been
an elixir
for this habit

of letting all
the lava
go
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Comments: 7

Pathos1987 [2010-03-17 06:16:41 +0000 UTC]

sleep writing, eh? well, it's better than anything i've done nocturnal! the second and third stanzas smoothly connect to the ending with this feeling of a release. the image provoked is wonderful, too : )

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hellostrangeone In reply to Pathos1987 [2010-03-17 18:34:20 +0000 UTC]

thank you!! I'm glad it's not terrible haha.

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Pathos1987 In reply to hellostrangeone [2010-03-18 23:07:51 +0000 UTC]

heh, I have yet to read one (and doubt I ever will)

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hellostrangeone In reply to Pathos1987 [2010-03-19 04:36:21 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks!

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TheForgottenKnight [2010-03-16 00:50:50 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. Interesting. I don't believe there is...unless by lava you mean pee... which I somehow doubt. =]

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hellostrangeone In reply to TheForgottenKnight [2010-03-16 04:47:45 +0000 UTC]

haha no that's not what I meant

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TheForgottenKnight In reply to hellostrangeone [2010-03-17 01:11:37 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I didnt think so=]

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