HOME | DD
Published: 2009-01-05 00:33:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 105; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
Redirect to original
Description
Loose and wasted;there is nothing left in malice
though you'll keep trying
to cry, drink, fuck
a person back to life.
Loose and wasted;
the fight does not exist
though fighting words
keep trying to hate
a life back into you.
Demanding respect
for empty superiority
is not enough to create.
Driven to
cry, drink, fuck,
but nothing more.
Comments: 3
Sandost [2009-01-29 22:13:53 +0000 UTC]
i can tap to the feelings in this, but i can't really decipher it. i think such is my writing, as well.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
hellostrangeone In reply to Sandost [2009-01-31 01:00:33 +0000 UTC]
I think that feeling is the most important part of any poem. Deciphering it is a whole nother story.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
