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hellostrangeone — Gone Today
Published: 2009-12-16 01:22:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 120; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description
she's a different evilevery day
the night comes
to morph bodies
into shapes without
room for peace
progress, progress, progress
today it means nothing
fill her disease just
to drain the blood;
say good morning
and measure up
a vision in
glowing lace,
she's the perfect woman
baggage clawing her heels
pop, pop, pop
you're wasting your time
pick the curse
she's got it all
Comments: 3
the imagery here is powerful, especially in the second and fifth stanzas. it's really strange and creative that you mustered this all from a picture!
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and strange is always good in my book
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I was wondering if it was a good strange. Thanks!
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