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hellostrangeone — Honey
Published: 2010-03-22 19:47:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 134; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description took my hand,
asked me why
I wouldn't carry her
after she broke my fingers

the air hits;
does it dissolve the wound

I don't think you can feel it
from you're standing baby

I've been lookin for
the limbs I lost, for ages
but I still can't grasp
what I find

it's not sweet
it's not cute anymore
you're findin out
there's no honey in your baby doll

tear me up
tell me what you find
is it full of hope
or is it just killing time

I eat my sugar
I love my sugar
I love my sugar
but it never stays

even the leaves shiver
for you
I shiver
for you

but it never stays
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Comments: 6

Pathos1987 [2010-03-24 05:14:19 +0000 UTC]

I really like the metaphors of losing limbs and eating sugar. They remind me of a person trying to regain a joy that's become so faint. I'd love to hear it as a song, too! I'm sure it adds a whole new dimension to the mood

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hellostrangeone In reply to Pathos1987 [2010-03-24 20:45:28 +0000 UTC]

it's best when you actually hear the song that's for sure. i'm glad you like it

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Pathos1987 In reply to hellostrangeone [2010-03-25 00:46:16 +0000 UTC]

post it up!

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hellostrangeone In reply to Pathos1987 [2010-03-25 05:48:16 +0000 UTC]

still looking for somewhere to record...

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BTDubbs In reply to hellostrangeone [2010-03-27 04:30:03 +0000 UTC]

Do it up!

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TheForgottenKnight [2010-03-23 00:09:41 +0000 UTC]

second line first stanza, my or me? other than that... I kinda like this. the trouble with the ones that come easy is they almost always need work, but you did really good. haha I love this smiley=] kinda fitting... it seemed like yo were talking about an addiction of some sort towards the end.

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