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always latching onto some thing;that scene, that lust is
supposed to bring substance
when the fear of
creating
your own purpose
is the only motive
claiming life in cliches
because the milk and honey
never demanded It's children
to breath
a life they were
responsible for
never spoon-fed the ideals
that are supposed to
make us happy,
exclusive,
and so
fucking extraordinary
for you were always meant to
sit-back
and watch your existence
unfold
into a
beautiful martyrdom.
poor child,
you thrive off the very morals
this bourgeoisie
fed you
yet it receives the blame
for your decay.
continue latching onto the
superficial
hoping it will fill
the void of identity;
as it is the only
thing you made for yourself
the blessings of a
seasoned heart
mean nothing
as excuses from the
fear
to use your mind.
Comments: 15
hellostrangeone In reply to Stockholm-Romance666 [2010-01-19 04:16:28 +0000 UTC]
thank you! I really appreciate it.
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Stockholm-Romance666 In reply to hellostrangeone [2010-01-19 04:31:27 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
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Pathos1987 [2009-12-31 00:50:53 +0000 UTC]
Short or long, your writing is amazing. I could definitely see religion being one of the subjects in here. I love the pessimistic, but simultaneously realist, authorial voice of this piece. It strikes hard and actually lures you to ponder about these existential observations. Great work
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hellostrangeone In reply to Pathos1987 [2009-12-31 07:46:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad it actually makes you think a bit deeper.
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findxme [2009-12-30 03:13:30 +0000 UTC]
I enjoyed it throughly. I think that the word choice added something extra to it. Long definately suits you.
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hellostrangeone In reply to findxme [2009-12-30 06:42:36 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
I spent a bit more time with the word choice on this one.
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TheForgottenKnight [2009-12-29 02:33:33 +0000 UTC]
Is it about religion? I have to ask this time. I'm curious, and I think its your first with a curse word
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hellostrangeone In reply to TheForgottenKnight [2009-12-30 06:42:12 +0000 UTC]
I didn't write it with religion in mind, but now that I look at it closer this definitely describes religion for me.
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TheForgottenKnight In reply to hellostrangeone [2009-12-31 04:46:11 +0000 UTC]
=[ Im sorry to hear that. my experiences with religion can vary in feeling. im sorry yours arent the greatest. might I ask why though?
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hellostrangeone In reply to TheForgottenKnight [2009-12-31 07:46:22 +0000 UTC]
hmm. i think it's too complicated to have a definite answer to.
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TheForgottenKnight In reply to hellostrangeone [2010-01-01 02:19:27 +0000 UTC]
i know all too well how hat feels, but i find that when things seem too complicated it usualy mans theres just a simple answer that was overlooked. but anyways, im sorry.
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krystallicblood [2009-12-29 01:51:26 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing! very nice... so true... I LOVE IT, BEAUTIFUL! ^^ nice work
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hellostrangeone In reply to krystallicblood [2009-12-30 06:41:31 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much!
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krystallicblood In reply to hellostrangeone [2009-12-30 17:44:45 +0000 UTC]
your welcome! ^^
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