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Published: 2009-07-31 18:06:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 57; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description don't let this burden you love
for in our hands is more
beauty,
honesty,
empathy,
than either of has ever known

in one single moment,
in all the moments of a year
I have felt more in your touch,
your words,
your eyes,
than I ever thought possible

I would adopt all your worries
just to show you

if only I could

if only I could stop
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Comments: 6

Pathos1987 [2009-11-15 10:53:49 +0000 UTC]

This is a really precious, sincere poem--inspired from a personal experience?

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hellostrangeone In reply to Pathos1987 [2009-11-15 20:19:00 +0000 UTC]

yes. a very wonderful experience.

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Zinc-Tails [2009-09-03 01:27:55 +0000 UTC]

Its been awhile since I've had a poem touch my heart. Very well done!

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hellostrangeone In reply to Zinc-Tails [2009-09-03 18:27:29 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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TyBerkeley [2009-08-09 18:59:27 +0000 UTC]

Very touching, and well written. Nice work

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hellostrangeone In reply to TyBerkeley [2009-08-09 20:20:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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