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hellostrangeone — Renee
Published: 2009-10-06 01:38:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 61; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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they say it's nuclearbut we diverge
from cozy home
to hostility
she showed me how
to straighten up
cook an egg
hold my keys
spot a cop
--even in the dark
he taught me how
to stand on ice
laugh and dance
care for
everyone
I may not know
she showed me what
true suffering
looks like
and how to feel
a past that
wasn't mine
she taught me
that I have a choice
in every single thing I do
and no matter
where I go, I have
a love to come back to
little child
you're so selfish
that's more than
she ever had
--but she worked twice as hard
for you
we are
atypical
I have yet to know my middle name
Comments: 9
It's good, you've got this sincere thing here. Honest, real, touching. I can relate to this.. there's love expressed, and all those other things.. the grey stuff, which is hard to describe but we carry around.
Sorry, i'm sleep deprived and am probably not making myself clear.
Keep writing, that's all i want to say.
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no I really get it. thanks for your thoughts.
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I hope that's a good wow...
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No problem !!!!! 
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hrm. this is actually very thought provoking. it makes me think of when all of these things happened in my life.
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i'm glad it's relateable.
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