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Published: 2010-09-03 05:04:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 278; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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hold your arms upone last time
everybody smiles
in plastic teeth
as you murder many
and tarnish faith
I've watched you die
and watched you kill
shaking before
your final scene
we'll take you down
to the pits of hell
burn it down
burn it through
your laughter falls
to gunshot wounds
explosive truth
will show you all
your beloved curtain
will always fall
Comments: 3
Pathos1987 [2010-09-15 02:18:24 +0000 UTC]
another great piece the imagery used to depict this actor really sets the mood. i'm also intrigued to know who the narrator is, after reading their fiery diatribe. my favorite line is "your laughter falls to gunshot wounds." (reminds me of at-the-drive-in for some reason)
is this going to become a character series?
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hellostrangeone In reply to Pathos1987 [2010-09-15 03:57:45 +0000 UTC]
it may indeed be part of a character series! just not following the same character.
I'll tell you it was inspired by film but I don't want to give it all away
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Pathos1987 In reply to hellostrangeone [2010-09-22 04:46:34 +0000 UTC]
lovely! I can't wait to read more of these
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