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Published: 2009-10-10 18:43:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 97; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description narrow idiots

your stupidity
only serves to further
polarize
this controversy

I will listen
when you stop
murdering
the doctors

break your bible
and pay attention
to the mind of
your opposition

I do respect
your cause
your fight
your opinion

but I will not
respect
the ignorance
of your hatred

we never know
who will disagree

so kill me
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Comments: 4

BTDubbs [2009-10-13 01:40:46 +0000 UTC]

I can just imagine - you're walking by a protest, listening to their angry screams and tilted hypocrisy and you've had it. You can't take it anymore. You start to speak.
The words flow. They fly out, blown by energy, passion in each burst. It doesn't come clean, it doesn't come fast. There are trips, there are breaks. But it quiets them. For just a moment, they listen. They hear a voice. They lower their own to catch yours.
Your last words stir them up. Your finale sparks a frenzy.
You calmly walk away.

I like.

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hellostrangeone In reply to BTDubbs [2009-10-13 18:08:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the incredible comment.

That's everything I'm hoping to do with writing is evoke strong images like that.

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findxme [2009-10-12 14:34:55 +0000 UTC]

I like. There's so much narrow mindedness in the world. It's sad.

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hellostrangeone In reply to findxme [2009-10-12 20:15:09 +0000 UTC]

tell me about it.

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