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hellostrangeone — True Stranger
Published: 2010-07-23 05:47:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 214; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description she carries salt in her hands
I carry pride in my glands
knowing every step I choose
takes me farther from you

damn it feels great
leaving books in the wake

all that's left is
ocean breeze
drowning to death
in fresh whiskey

so I'll play solitaire just
to bring the emphasis
playing with my lungs
as if I care about the bliss

goodbye to you my stranger bear
too busy acting like you care

I've seen the lies inside your truth
and it's all I need to fly this coup

who would've guessed
my stranger's name
would ring so true
within this game

no longer will I write for you
your face is void; but if I do

I'll draw it out
in hindsight spell

you're gone my love

and my god it's swell
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Comments: 11

BTDubbs [2010-08-06 12:52:17 +0000 UTC]

A very strong ending. To you, the best.

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hellostrangeone In reply to BTDubbs [2010-08-07 07:27:39 +0000 UTC]

thank you <3

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BTDubbs In reply to hellostrangeone [2010-08-09 02:29:14 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome.

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TheForgottenKnight [2010-07-25 04:15:20 +0000 UTC]

=] LOVE IT! were you listening to a song when you wote it?

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hellostrangeone In reply to TheForgottenKnight [2010-07-27 21:32:59 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much! I actually wasn't listening to a song when I wrote it though

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TheForgottenKnight In reply to hellostrangeone [2010-07-28 00:33:14 +0000 UTC]

wow, cool it had awesome rhythm=]

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hellostrangeone In reply to TheForgottenKnight [2010-08-02 10:11:11 +0000 UTC]

why thank you

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Tricker101 [2010-07-23 07:00:10 +0000 UTC]

what of? If i may ask.

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hellostrangeone In reply to Tricker101 [2010-07-23 08:45:43 +0000 UTC]

past love

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findxme [2010-07-23 05:57:05 +0000 UTC]

congratulation.

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hellostrangeone In reply to findxme [2010-07-23 08:45:32 +0000 UTC]

maybe.

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