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Published: 2010-07-23 05:47:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 214; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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she carries salt in her handsI carry pride in my glands
knowing every step I choose
takes me farther from you
damn it feels great
leaving books in the wake
all that's left is
ocean breeze
drowning to death
in fresh whiskey
so I'll play solitaire just
to bring the emphasis
playing with my lungs
as if I care about the bliss
goodbye to you my stranger bear
too busy acting like you care
I've seen the lies inside your truth
and it's all I need to fly this coup
who would've guessed
my stranger's name
would ring so true
within this game
no longer will I write for you
your face is void; but if I do
I'll draw it out
in hindsight spell
you're gone my love
and my god it's swell
Comments: 11
TheForgottenKnight [2010-07-25 04:15:20 +0000 UTC]
=] LOVE IT! were you listening to a song when you wote it?
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hellostrangeone In reply to TheForgottenKnight [2010-07-27 21:32:59 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much! I actually wasn't listening to a song when I wrote it though
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TheForgottenKnight In reply to hellostrangeone [2010-07-28 00:33:14 +0000 UTC]
wow, cool it had awesome rhythm=]
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hellostrangeone In reply to TheForgottenKnight [2010-08-02 10:11:11 +0000 UTC]
why thank you
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