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Published: 2010-10-14 02:31:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 151; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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This is a practice for page three of a comic I'm making. I'm not totally happy with it.[link] Page 2
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Mistakes are the key to improvement.
While looking for mistakes, I'd suggest also looking for things you think you did better here than in the past ;D It might be encouraging! At the same time, be 100% honest with yourself. Nothing more sad than lying to yourself D;
In any case, I think it seems nice, the panel where the narrator sits in the bar/on the stool (?) is a little hard to catch but it didn't take away from the story so kudos to you xD
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You are right, I often see a mix of good and bad in what I make, this is the first comic I've ever made so yeah, there's a lot of room for improvement.
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