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Page 10 of CaptainRedfox oneshotDone with my friend
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God I love this comic. Your style is stunning. And this last part is my favorite.
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more.... please??? i just started and i gotta knoooowwwww...
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Good work on these first ten pages. You're off to a good start. Your artistic style and choice of colors is very refined, and shows a real dedication to craft. Your character models are also very consistent, and you've put a lot of attention to detail.
The dialogue is a bit spotty though; I picked out a few instances where you confused "Decent" (good) with "Descent" (going down) I don't blame you though, English is a very tricky language, especially for speakers of non-germanic and non-romance languages like Russian.
There's also some places where the lettering does not flow naturally, such as at the top of page 6, and again at the top of page 10. Remember that good lettering must guide the viewer across the page in a relatively continuous manner.
All in all, there's a lot of potential here, and I'm looking forward to seeing where this project leads. If you want my help as an editor, I'm always available for consultation.
Good work, and good luck!
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your drawings are very beautiful and the principal character is so charming ! ^^ i really like this story and i hope, one day, i'll can read it in french XD
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Man the size difference just gets me every time. Beautiful atmospheric colours and nice variation of angles. Quite a beautiful job you two did with this story!
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Many thanks for your review!
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You're welcome!
Say, I read in some comments that you're planning to publish it in france. But this means, no English version, right? That'd be really sad news for me for I don't speak French.
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And this is where I start begging for more. Please? I'm adoring these!
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great work, some of the best i've seen, keep at it, you'll go places.
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Dayum, Hellstern. As soon as this thing comes out, count me in for being among your first buyers!
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What...there aren't any more!? This comic is AMAZING I want MORE! WOW! Best drawn comic I've seen in a long time, and the story has me in it's grip!
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Just got finished reading these and they are so beautifully drawn and colored! I'm incredibly impressed! You are both so talented!
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aaaahhhh that's all of it?
you have to do more!!!!
this is awesome! > w<
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The art of this comic is impressive! The quality of drawing and coloring is equal or even superior to some comics sold in stores.
My only complaint is the writing: I'm not native English speaker, but I do recognize some awkward expressions that need some polish. Something went wrong during translation, I assume. I'd also suggest you to get rid of some "modern" expressions like "asap" and "gosh" that sound out of place in a medieval-like setting.
Besides this, you should really consider a career in the comic book industry if you don't already!
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Oh my goodness, these are utterly gorgeous pages and I have really enjoyed the story!
I think the good Captain Red Fox is going to have a busy time raising a bunch of young people. He seems like a very nice fellow.
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Admireable lineart and colouring! The best comic-art I've seen for a long time!
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Your artwork is astonishingly beautiful.
It does need some editing work on the text if you plan to publish it in english though, as it suffers from translation problems.
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It's beautifully done! Keep it up, both of you. I love your style.
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Nathie sent me... and I agree! The artwork is marvelous!
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Woah,that is exactly what I consider a GOOD COMIC PAGE should look like!!
I'd deffinitely buy that comicbook if I only was wealthy enough.
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Проучил большое удовольствие от просмотра комикса, ты молодец, вдохновляешь 
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Спасибо, будем и дальше стараться)
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These are gorgeous! Are they going to be printed for a comic series at all?
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It will be europen style graphic novel and we have big plans about the series.
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Awesome, Hope it really takes off for you then
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this is great, but I hate to point out, the kid's proportions are off. She looks like a tiny adult, because her head's too small
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Actually it may be partly because she's next to the "heroically proportioned" dude, but it's still a problem.
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Lovely comic, such beautiful drawing and painting !
Is there more?
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Your colors and decorative designs are really, really beautiful. Keep up the great work!
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You're so welcome, I really enjoyed reading it.
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