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Published: 2008-06-11 09:00:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 262; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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A TEAR FOR THE TELEGRAMS(I ask)Verse:
Shed a tear, for those at loss
Show a sign-a friendly gesture, then carry on:
Back to ordinary
It’s the way we like it to be
Pre:
Looking at the figures mouth wide
I was never that good at arithmetic
But they’re just numbers right?
Surely, they can’t mean!?
Chorus:
Maybe we should…
Put it in your face
See him, hanging by a thread
Maybe we should…
Put the numbers to the names
Reveal what is human
Or maybe we’re just too comfortable
Verse:
Vacant, as images blur into one
Headliners cease to halt our glances, and we walk on, by:
No imprint on our hearts
It’s the way we like it to be
Chorus:
Put it in your face
See him, hanging by a thread
Maybe we should…
Put the numbers to the names
Reveal what is human
Maybe we should…
Put it in your face
See him, hanging by a thread
Put the numbers to the names
Or maybe we’re just too comfortable
Post:
Looking at the figures mouth wide
I was never that good at arithmetic
But they’re just numbers right?
Surely, they can’t mean!?
Bridge:
Looking at the figures…
We’ve killed the need to care
Pick and choosing when to cry
Substituting life
Just looking at the figures…
We’ve killed the need to care
Pick and choosing when to cry
Substituting life
…Just looking…
Chorus (short):
See him, hanging by a thread
See him there, hanging…
A number.
Outro:
Can your conscience truly be clear?
Clear like the rains?
Or like the mud that you tread?
Can your conscience truly be clear?
Clear like the rains?
Or like the mud that you tread?
(You decide)
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Comments: 25
minniemeliorist [2008-06-19 10:55:08 +0000 UTC]
"looking at the figures" : -large numbers
- corpses (ie: figure=body)
so to me it was like you were not only talking of large numbers, but also being amazed at a large amount of casualties... (you kinda achieved a satirical tone, or a backward euphemism...i'm not sure if that's a good way for me to explain, but that was the interpretation!)
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HelpImALostCause In reply to minniemeliorist [2008-06-21 10:24:39 +0000 UTC]
Yeh i get it!
Soz, I never really thought of it that way
Nice one!
CONGRATUALTIONS
You have now been promoted to be my OFFICIAL editor-lol-
Keep it up Kim(that ur name right?)
H!IALC
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minniemeliorist In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-06-22 08:58:22 +0000 UTC]
yes, sure is Kim..... I would love to be your editor! Lol.... though i demand payment in gummi bears!!
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HelpImALostCause In reply to minniemeliorist [2008-06-23 08:10:24 +0000 UTC]
Erm...unfortunatley I can't send gummi bears over da net-soz
N flying over to australia(that's where you live right? I think?) jus 2 gv u some gummi bears is out of the Q-lol-
But I could write a piece for you maybe-lol-
Oh n if you want to be my editor, you 1st have to count urself as one of my official fans-soz
-lol- (if ur bored write something random in the comments of my pointless blog-see my page)-lol-
H!IALC
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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-23 16:58:52 +0000 UTC]
nyah? can you write me a piece? ^^
lol
not that i'm important
lol sorry couldn't help it
Love You!
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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-09-25 10:30:48 +0000 UTC]
Yeh sure honey
Just give me a subject and anything you want in the piece particulary
ok?
I LOVE YOU AND ONLY YOU!!! XXXXXX
H!IALC
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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-26 17:43:31 +0000 UTC]
give you 10 guesses what subject i want lol
mmmm something about me? like just things you love about me lol
or something
take your time ^^
I couldn't love anyone as much as I love you..
You know that right?
That i just, LOVE YOU SO MUCH.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-09-30 11:34:51 +0000 UTC]
Alright I'll see if i can't write one I'm happy with before i put some more stuff on the inter-web
U know I'll do anything for u. Right?
Maybe it can become a monthly thing-lol--me n u (i'm doing da glomping honey, soz)
H!IALC
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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-30 14:04:32 +0000 UTC]
kaay
yes i do ^^ and i'd do anything for you - you'd deserve it.
ooh that sounds good lol but you wouldnt be able to do one every month for me
Just occasionally would be lovely
cause i love you!
ooh so you're the pink smiley?
still, either way we're happy and hugging lol
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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-10-02 10:32:39 +0000 UTC]
Glomping, is the word, glomping
The pink does not reflect my sexuality-lol-
H!IALC
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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-10-02 19:37:15 +0000 UTC]
okay, it just highlights it a little
GLOMPING.
got it
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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-10-23 12:40:35 +0000 UTC]
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeexactly -lol-
H!IALC
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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-10-23 20:14:30 +0000 UTC]
preeeeeeeeeeeeeecisely!
i love you xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-12-18 18:17:03 +0000 UTC]
you are SO CUTE you make me giggle ^^
you're the bestest ever my honey
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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2009-01-08 16:21:30 +0000 UTC]
No you're the bestest sweetie, the bestest EVER!
So thus i can't be the best
-lol-
I Love you beauty
H!IALC
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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2009-01-08 16:27:51 +0000 UTC]
NO! you're the best - THE BEST!
So I can't be either
maybe we can share? ^^
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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2009-03-12 15:04:45 +0000 UTC]
Aren't we so arogant-lol- XXX
H!IALC
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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2009-03-12 21:12:14 +0000 UTC]
well you're the most important person in MY world, and hopefully you feel the same so we have to be the best to each other- no one else can be
^^
xxxxxxxxxx
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minniemeliorist In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-06-28 10:18:36 +0000 UTC]
Lol, define "official" fan.... i've never really understood the defining point between a fan and "official fan..."It's always seemed one of those silly uses of an adjective that doesn't really enhance the meaning at all.....but anyway, now i'm just natterring on about shitake....
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HelpImALostCause In reply to minniemeliorist [2008-06-30 08:00:12 +0000 UTC]
Haha
Well..."official" fan makes fan sound more important. And i suppose it means that I personally recognise you as my fan and not jus u taking an interst in my work-lol-
Tis an honourary title-lol-
H!IALC
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minniemeliorist [2008-06-15 11:56:06 +0000 UTC]
I think i'm particularly stunned at how effective the pun you've created with the use of the word "figures" becomes as you read on.....this is brilliant and simplistic, which is exactly what you need with these kind of themes... i have this film clip playing in my mind throughout it.... and that doesnt happen often when i read something for the first time.
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HelpImALostCause In reply to minniemeliorist [2008-06-16 13:10:43 +0000 UTC]
Ha! Yeh, soz, erm...that pun was unintentional-lol-
Glad u like it-how did u translate the line: "Looking at the figures"
Jus so we're on the same level-lol-
H!IALC
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WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-06-14 16:03:42 +0000 UTC]
a beautifull poem!
it really smacks reallity into your face somehow...
putting 'telegram' in the title was a really good idea!
it reminds about the huge number of deaths every day during WWII
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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-06-16 13:08:05 +0000 UTC]
I was kinda thinking Iraq in modern day, but yeh same implies
But with WW2 media was full of censorship n propoganda, but it still had shock value, things were v.dif back then, pos better-in a sense
H!IALC
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