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HelpImALostCause — Fall Through The Silver Lining
Published: 2008-06-11 09:07:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 313; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description Free-Fall Through The Silver Lining

Verse:
Setting the straights
Was harder than it seemed
Keeping the faked, smile
Never bought anyone

Pre:
Live, for disappointment
Watch, as their worlds collapse-all around you

Live, for disappointment
Watch: folded arms spell it out, to all

Verse:
Forgetting my faith
As books and words can’t salvage an answer
Run-ning away, from you
I never intended it to end this way round

Chorus:
I feel guilty
From the inside to the out
As gold memories turn to sand
And happiness drains from the crowds

Give me surgery
Gauge out the mistakes heavy in my heart
Hold me together-with-weathered stitches
Watch as winds blow me apart

Verse:
Setting the straights
Was harder than it seemed
Keeping the faked, smile
Never bought anyone
Forgetting my faith
As books and words can’t salvage an answer
Run-ning away, from you
I never intended it to end

Chorus:
I feel guilty
From the inside to the out
As gold memories turn to sand
And happiness drains from the crowds

Give me surgery
Gauge out the mistakes heavy in my heart
Hold me together-with-weathered stitches
Watch as winds blow me apart

Post:
And I feel…
Feel like I’m falling
When will it end?

Bridge:
I wish I could believe in a silver lining
One that I know would catch my fall
Hold-the mother’s touch
Repair-the cracks embroidered in my history

Post:
And I feel…
Feel like I’m falling
When will it end?

And I feel…
Feel like I’m struggling
Drowning in myself
Laid my own grave
When will it end?

(When will it end?)

Outro:
I am a catalyst, defected and let loose-don’t get too close to me
If you do, watch as the things you love, slowly yet break apart
(Because)
I make the murder days-blanket life within the shade
Invert the way you want it, end up where you don’t want to be
(…I’m sorry for the way I am…)

I never meant this!

When will it end?

When will it end?

When will it…

…end?
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Comments: 35

xLetItBleed [2008-06-26 19:24:17 +0000 UTC]

"Watch as winds blow me apart"

favorite line. beautiful.

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HelpImALostCause In reply to xLetItBleed [2008-06-26 19:31:44 +0000 UTC]

I know-kl in't it-lol-

I like that piece i think I wrote it quite well, which is good bcoz I love the theme.

I hate when I come up with a great theme bt write shitty lyrics to it-lol-

Recently wrote a pop/punkish song on the idea of feeling ur insignificant

Kl-idea
Not so kl-lyrics-lol-

I don't know what i was thinking then, my hand was jus typing, n it works quite well its jus not my style

...weird...

H!IALC

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xLetItBleed In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-06-26 19:33:39 +0000 UTC]

Im sure it is, you are a very good lyricist. :]

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HelpImALostCause In reply to xLetItBleed [2008-06-26 19:40:20 +0000 UTC]

"Why thank you!" said in a stereotyped posh english voice-lol-

Yeh everyone keeps saying that-be careful i might start believing u guys n bcome super arogant.

So knock me down b4 I can get there-lol-

H!IALC

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disturbedchicken [2008-06-19 19:59:40 +0000 UTC]

you didnt ruin anything you never do ^^
i dont like being late because i dont like making entrances lol and i wanna sneak in before everyone else lol i dont mind waiting, i just prefer to know if you'll be late
you know i really do love you so much - you're so wonderful to me ^^ i couldnt want you to change at all. and i dont - i love you as you are i really do
and you dont get mad when i do stuff like that, and you dont hate my bad qualities (there are so many!) so why should i?
plus i can NEVER be mad at you lol or dislike you in anyway!!
I LOVE YOU TOM!

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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-06-21 10:05:24 +0000 UTC]

I know-its good u say it

But i still feel bad when i let ppl down, esp u

But I love you regardless xxxxxxxxXXX

H!IALC

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HelpImALostCause In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-06-23 11:01:10 +0000 UTC]

Jus wish I wouldn't happen in the 1st place, jus fed up of it

But I'm tryng harder now, hopefully I'll improve-lol-

xxxxxxxXXXXX

H!IALC

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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-06-23 10:30:14 +0000 UTC]

you dont and even if you do i'd always forgive you ^^ cause you make up for it in SO many ways
and i know what you mean, because i let people down a lot too, but its okay really - i love you
I REALLY DO.
no matter what

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minniemeliorist [2008-06-19 11:01:35 +0000 UTC]

hmmmm not sure on whether "free-falling" or "falling" is just better for the title..... i suppose "free-falling" is more of an intentional thing (is that what you're after with this?) wheras "falling" by itself is more of an unintentional, dramatic, uncontrolled, helpless connotation.....It al depends upon your initial intent/feeling with this piece

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HelpImALostCause In reply to minniemeliorist [2008-06-21 10:17:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeh-I like ur explaination, fits v.well

The title of the piece IS "free-falling..." but the bloody *fuck I'm sounding English* DA site won't let me input that many characters.

I personally liked it because of the alliteration and the extra sylables-lol-

Oh, btw do u like those lil'() explainy thingys I include after my pieces, coz I think I might remove them, if enough ppl find them usefull, they'll stay

-lol-

H!IALC

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minniemeliorist [2008-06-15 11:51:25 +0000 UTC]

"Give me surgery
Gauge out the mistakes heavy in my heart
Hold me together-with-weathered stitches
Watch as winds blow me apart"

I particularly like this stanza in your chorus....the image is so vivid and represents that sense of regret and broken-ness within our actions as people when we feel we've failed. Overall, nice work!

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HelpImALostCause In reply to minniemeliorist [2008-06-16 13:05:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanx a bunch!

Yeh i like it too (was a bit worried with the rhyming-coz its simple) found it tricky finding some more to go with that for the chorus

Thanx for the comment-u like the title?(the full one?)

-lol-

Keep in touch

H!IALC

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WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-06-14 15:57:16 +0000 UTC]

YEAAAHH!
great poem dude!

no alternative interpretetions....
my opinion you already heard
the title is ok and don't ask me for improvements cause i don't master english at all

great man!
why don't you search for someone to sing all your songs?
maybe you'll become famous!! ^^
ciou

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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-06-16 13:03:48 +0000 UTC]

Haha! Thanx for the enthusiasm-lol-

Ur great!-lol-

Yeh I suppose some of my stuff WOULD sound gd in a song, but no-one would sing for me-lol-(Besides this is just a hobby)-lol-

I write lyrics for my band*links down below* but none of the songs on our myspace have my lyrics (had a dif singer -btw I don't sing, do drums n lyrics)-lol-

We're recording atm so check it out soon-the song is "ROADSIDE" (lyrics r in my gallery)

Thanx a bunch!

H!IALC

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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-21 10:32:13 +0000 UTC]

ahem lol

write some music for it and i'd never stop singing it lol
i kinda want to hear these as songs too

sorry, as your stalker, i feel i have to comment on your other conversations lol (if i have something to say relating to them lol)

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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-09-23 11:49:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh course!

I expect it honey

But yeh once we've finished the songs with the band u can hear some of the lyrics

Would be nice if some ppl on DA wrote songs 2 my lyrics, u could do it, if u're bored, a 'lil piano piece maybe

-lol-

H!IALC

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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-23 12:22:44 +0000 UTC]

oh i'm awful at writing the music, just the words

i look forwards do it honey, you know i'm your biggest fan!

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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-09-23 13:59:13 +0000 UTC]

I know-lol-

U'd have to be wouldn't you-lol-

H!IALC

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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-23 14:06:35 +0000 UTC]

yes I'm your groupie lol

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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-09-25 10:24:07 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...online internet groupie

Interesting...

H!IALC

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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-26 17:59:07 +0000 UTC]

Plenty of cyber sex

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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-09-30 11:40:11 +0000 UTC]

Yeh the ideas nice, but it's not that great when you get down to it

H!IALC

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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-30 14:01:59 +0000 UTC]

well true lol
i mean its what we're pretty much doing in these comments lol

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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-10-02 10:25:39 +0000 UTC]

Really!?

I hadn't noticed

Are you...with my...

Seems u r

H!IALC

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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-10-02 19:38:47 +0000 UTC]

guess i am

i mean you...
and then i...

well.

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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-10-23 12:50:02 +0000 UTC]

It jus like...

Wen i...

Oooops...

-lol-

H!IALC

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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-10-23 20:11:02 +0000 UTC]

and then you..
well of course then that...
and then

well. (again)

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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-12-18 12:40:18 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry I know exactly what you're talking about-lol-



H!IALC:headdbang:

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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-12-18 18:13:23 +0000 UTC]

good, cause I haven't got a clue

I just... LOVE YOU SO VERY MUCH MORE THAN ANYTHING EVER COMPLETELY AND CRAZILY AND FOREVER
^^

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WhereIsMyIcecream In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-06-19 18:05:41 +0000 UTC]

maybe you can sell the lyrics on the internet

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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-06-21 10:19:06 +0000 UTC]

Serious...u think ppl would buy em?

U know u can just copy n paste em if u wanna steal them

-lol-

H!IALC

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WhereIsMyIcecream In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-06-21 16:15:09 +0000 UTC]

well,, your texts on deviantart can't be selled anymore...
but you can let people pay you for making texts for them
i mean,, you write awesome!
so,, thinking of how people make their money these days,, it shouldn't be hard to get rich!!
haa,, hope to see a next piece soon ^^

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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-06-23 08:13:34 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...really I DO need the money...

Nah, this is just a hobby really, not a money making scheme, besides I write lyrics for my band [link] so if we get famous-lol-then I'll get cash for it-lol-

Thanx for ALL the support and generous comments.

Would consider yourself an official fan?

H!IALC

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H-a-n-k [2008-06-11 10:57:16 +0000 UTC]

ooo
lovely use of words n_n

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HelpImALostCause In reply to H-a-n-k [2008-06-16 12:55:49 +0000 UTC]

Why, thank you, this one is my fav out of my new pieces, that's why I blogged it-lol-

Thanx for commenting-c u around!

H!IALC

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