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Published: 2007-11-25 19:06:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 167; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Kill(everything)

Chorus:
Kill the houselights! They’re after us, gaining on us
Kill the silence! With blasting of handguns
Kill the houselights! They’re raiding, they’re hunting for us
Kill the silence! With the noise of the dead

Verse:
Eternal thumping that implodes the brain
The air grows thin, the tension rises, past our throats
Can you take the pressure, will you scream and shout?
The choice is now and it’s your time to choke

Chorus:
Kill the houselights! They’re after us, gaining on us
Kill the silence! With blasting of handguns
Kill the houselights! They’re raiding, they’re hunting for us
Kill the silence! With the noise of the dead

Verse:
A single sound and you’ll be the death of us
Clenching metal for valour and bravery
But perspiring hands, reveal our cowardice
The time is now, let’s meet our final hour strong

Chorus:
Kill the houselights! They’re after us, gaining on us
Kill the silence! With blasting of handguns
Kill the houselights! They’re raiding, they’re hunting for us
Kill the silence! With the noise of the dead

Kill!
The!
Houselights!
NOW!, If you want to live!

Kill!
The
Houselights!
NOW! And we might just live!

Bridge:
The thickening of the drone of dripping blood, above
The clicking of magazines, the crunching of the feet,
Here they come…

GUN SHOTS!
GUN SHOTS!

Grab my hand! Clasp me close!

GUN SHOTS!
GUN SHOTS!

And we’ll dive through this shattered glass!

GUN SHOTS!
GUN SHOTS!

Grab my hand! Clasp me close!

GUN SHOTS!
GUN SHOTS!

And we’ll survive! Survive into the sunset!






…Leave this past, cold and dead behind…
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Comments: 8

WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-06-07 16:00:11 +0000 UTC]

i like it,,, your explanation fits it perfectly
like everyone who's a bit different than others, get's so much (negative) attention that they rather flee instead of being theirselfses because one day they'll get crazy
the poem shows their emotions very well,, the character is really sick and tired of this and very mad at the moment..
(in holland: the drop that makes the bucket overflow)
very agressive poem

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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-06-10 16:16:10 +0000 UTC]

Glad u love it!

MAN ur a great fan-thanx

Feel free 2 check ANY other older pieces of mine

H!IALC

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WhereIsMyIcecream In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-06-14 15:30:38 +0000 UTC]

i will

i love your pieces!
sometimes,, i think i've a great sentence to make a poem of,, but i often fail at that last part
but you can,,,, respect!

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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-06-17 08:43:05 +0000 UTC]

Yeh, well I write down anything from just words or sentences to sections which I think would be good to put in a piece, some get put into pieces, others are just left.

I think the best advice is to be pesistant, continue finishing a piece once you've got a fare way through it, and if there's bits u don't like in it, leave it a while and then change it when you think of something to replace it with.

N even if you do dislike a piece a bit, post it online anyway, and find out wht other people think-it can be really helpful, bcoz even if you don't particulary like it, someone else might-lol-

Soz for the rant-lol-

H!IALC

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SaffyreNeko [2007-12-29 00:18:07 +0000 UTC]

0_0 Woah...all three of your pieces of writing so far are just full of drama and/or angst...
I like the chorus in this one, and the part after the beginning of the bridge starting with 'Gun shots' ...really nice, well written. ^_^

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HelpImALostCause In reply to SaffyreNeko [2008-02-21 12:17:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanx!

Sorry I haven't replied for a while...yeah I've got 10 pieces uploaded now, feel free to comment!

Thanx for the attention-always helps

H!IALC

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SaffyreNeko In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-02-28 02:47:55 +0000 UTC]

No worries, I've had a hard time keeping track of stuff here on DA lately too.
And yeah, I'd give more attention if I could...but one of the things I live by is "look out for yourself, otherwise you can't help others." So, yeah, that's what I've been busy doing. >_>;

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HelpImALostCause [2007-11-29 21:10:06 +0000 UTC]

Buy "Kill The Houselights" from Thursday NOW! @ ur local record store for the cheap, cheap price of £12.00-lol-

...

Just do it...-lol-

H!IALC

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