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Published: 2009-01-15 11:48:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 239; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Make A MoveVerse
Make a move
Just one cut
Ignite the fire
And never stop, if you can
Spare the time that is
Let yourself go
Of the railing
Put your faith
In nonsense
The good ol’ fashioned way
Chorus
Escape your place, those ordered ranks
And let the monster breathe
Everyone inside, believes in defiance
So dip your fingers into the honey
Break it down all within your head
And cross that line
Post
Sick
Fed up
Thrown up
For the last time
Scared
Led down
Mixed up
Where you weren’t supposed to be
Verse
Make a jump
For insanity
Surprise them
And embrace the squeeze, the buzz
That’s no longer a hum anymore
Dare to read
Something illegal
Spend some time
Beneath the spotlight
Live a lie, and see how far it can go
Post
Sick
Fed up
Thrown up
For the last time
Scared
Led down
Mixed up
Where you weren’t supposed to be
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Comments: 8
WhereIsMyIcecream [2009-01-20 19:20:12 +0000 UTC]
this is indeed a funny one
u're telling us to make a mess of ourselfes n anything arround us ^^
on the other part it says like we shouldn't be afraid of what life will bring us... just 'make a move' n if u're still using ur brains there's a fair chance u will make it!
so there is a litte meaning included
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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2009-01-22 16:09:39 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeh a meaning did develop
N i suppose its not neccesarily a comical piece more of jus a fun spontaneous piece
Kinda jus written for the hell of it
Glad you like it tho
H!IALC
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WhereIsMyIcecream In reply to HelpImALostCause [2009-01-23 07:01:29 +0000 UTC]
i enjoyed it ^^
i've been inactive to long but
i hope to upload 2 new portraits wihin a month
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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2009-01-29 16:20:25 +0000 UTC]
Good nice one!
Give me a shout when they're up and i'll see what i can do
H!IALC
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WhereIsMyIcecream In reply to HelpImALostCause [2009-01-30 15:35:17 +0000 UTC]
i will ^^
hmm.. might take a while
i'm not good with deadlines
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disturbedchicken [2009-01-15 17:23:45 +0000 UTC]
*fan girl arrives*
I love it ^^
"Escape your place, those ordered ranks
And let the monster breathe" is a really cool bit
then maybe I just keep imagining a lil' dinosaur-monster going "rawr" at people
I'm not silly
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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2009-01-22 16:16:19 +0000 UTC]
Well it wasn't really intended in that way
But at least that's cuuuute
I didn't really like that line too much anyway-kinda chessy-but it fufilled my purpose
Love you XXXX
H!IALC
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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2009-01-22 18:02:55 +0000 UTC]
I liked it! Mainly cause my response meant you called me cute
*catches kiss and treasures it*
I LOVES YOU!!
i didn't know you were going online! it was a nice surprise
XXXXXXXX
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