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HelpImALostCause — Models: For Their Mannequins
Published: 2008-05-02 14:33:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 244; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Models: For Their Mannequins

Verse:
I hate the smell of cleaning products
Burns the nostrils and wets the eyes
A representation of perfection, of the way…we’re not
Trying to hard to reach the stars
Scalping our hair and wasting away
No one knows that up close they’re a mess
Burning sulphur and hydrogen

Pre:
Decaying to dust…behind the mask

Chorus:
Lips to lips in the masquerade
Bathing in the impossibility
Dancing in the pouring rain
Concealed, and covered up
No one will ruin our complexion
(When everything’s all a, ok!)

Verse:
Don’t worry, it’s only natural or so we’re told
The neighbours complained about a weird noise-outside
The dogs ate the children alive-again
And not even an eye-lid beats
Just like how skeletons reign supreme
Idols pasted on girls’ bedroom walls
Are we mad? It doesn’t make sense

Pre:
Decaying to dust…behind the mask

Chorus:
Lips to lips in the masquerade
Bathing in the impossibility
Dancing in the pouring rain
Concealed, and covered up
No one will ruin our complexion
(When everything’s all a, ok!)

ok..
ok..

Post:
Reminisce about the times without branding
Where the ugly duckling could flourish and grow

“The pigs are taking over” that’s what you’d want to say
Where’s the satisfaction in letting you win

Bit off the tongue and thrown away
Now do up your tie and raise your chin-stand proud of what we are

We are…
We are…

Outro:
We are!
All animals, after all
We are the animals, after all
Take a note from nature and stick to the fridge, burn it onto the back of your memory
“Only the fittest will survive”

We are all animals, after all (take it off)
We are the animals, after all (show me what’s real)
Take a note from nature and stick to the fridge, burn it onto the back of your memory
“Only the fittest will survive”
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Comments: 12

edwardking [2008-05-16 08:20:22 +0000 UTC]

i was expecting you to be slagging off the model industry which would have been too feminist, but it works well like this

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HelpImALostCause In reply to edwardking [2008-05-16 12:28:27 +0000 UTC]

Haha-what do u think of me?-lol-

I didn't puposely write about the model industry it just kind of evolved that way, personally I think it's more about perfection, and how its both unattainable and ridiculous to persue-lol-

I liked the idea of perfection and how we don't question it-lol-

What do u think of the title?

H!IALC

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edwardking In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-05-16 15:04:05 +0000 UTC]

the title works well

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HelpImALostCause In reply to edwardking [2008-05-18 09:25:30 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...how come, it was jus something i strung together because I couldn't think of a title, I suppose the alloteration's quite good, jus the meaning i'm not too sure abt, wht do you think da title means?

One previous title was "Biting back at the Biter" (again alliteration) but it sucked, right?

H!IALC

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edwardking In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-05-18 10:38:29 +0000 UTC]

that one wasn't your best title i must say, but titles are important because lets face it - prose on deviant in any form will be less popular than something visual - theres no thinking involved (much) so you could apply the principles that newspapers do which is something catchy - but then again you run the risk of "selling" it so perhaps a summation of your ideas/ thoughts instead?

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HelpImALostCause In reply to edwardking [2008-05-22 10:09:29 +0000 UTC]

Yeh thanx for the advice-I try and make interesting titles, some from the song, others just linking and some random-lol-

N its a shame that literature gets less of a look in than photos-altho I am a sucker for it too- (I dunno I find long, long text puts me off) So I'm REALLY thankful for the attention from u guys-GREATLY apreciate it!

And to be honest I'm not trying to flog my work to the masses(just anyone who'll apreciate it) so "selling" it won't work. It kinda conforms to the type of lyrics I'm avoiding: boring, cliche, overly catchy, thats VERY mainstream-lol-

H!IALC

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disturbedchicken [2008-05-02 17:18:50 +0000 UTC]

yay ^^ you're getting reeeaaallly good!
sorry lol you put me in a hyper happy mood lol

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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-05-06 08:27:25 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you-glad you think that(always helps)

U sed u liked this 1 a lot-how come?

N how come u like da title SO much?

-lol-

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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-05-09 17:56:17 +0000 UTC]

i have no idea seriously - i just saw the title and thought "i wish i could come up with titles like that" lol
i love ALL your work silly! ^^

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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-05-11 13:21:52 +0000 UTC]

That's kinda da problem-but oh well

N I think da title's pretty crap bt its kinda growing on me(like moss)-lol-what wld u interpret it as honey?

xxxxxxxxxXXXXXXXXX

H!IALC

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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-05-14 11:04:02 +0000 UTC]

dooooooont aaaaaask meeeeeee lol
i'm bad at this
some pieces i like more than others but i DO like all of them k?
love you xxxxxxxxxxxxx

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HelpImALostCause [2008-05-02 14:34:37 +0000 UTC]

Lemme know what you think of the title or the meaning-jus wandering-lol-

H!IALC

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