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HelpImALostCause — Over The Handlebars
Published: 2008-05-02 14:27:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 133; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Over The Handlebars

Verse:
My thoughts go out to your mother
You must be glad that she’s not with us-no more
Can’t see the mess that you’ve made, that you’re stuck in

Guilt hides beneath the surface
Waiting for your foot-ting to fall
You’ve chosen this path, now follow it up and crawl through

Pre:
The bigger, the picture
Words that don’t cross your mind
Small minded, lopsided
Suits your palette far much more

You
Don’t
Want
To know

…to know…

Chorus:
Smoke hangs on your clothes
The smell of distant love
Awaken all alone
In a pool of your own blood

You’ve pushed it too far
You’ve tried karma’s patience for too long
When will you regain control, consciousness?
Realised you’ve flown over(and out, of control)

Verse:
You think you’d be happy
Living the life that we’d all love(secretly)
When money’s solely a number

(Slowly ticking down, trickling down your back)

And all the parties blur into one
Throat deep in all the troubles
Thinking “how has life lost all of its fun?”

Wake up, where you don’t recognise
Hospital gates open with familiarity
A bed reserved for you

Pre:
The bigger, the picture
Words that don’t cross your mind
Small minded, lopsided
Suits your palette far much more

You
Don’t
Want
To know

…to know…

Chorus:
Smoke hangs on your clothes
The smell of distant love
Awaken all alone
In a pool of your own blood

You’ve pushed it too far
You’ve tried karma’s patience for too long
When will you regain control, consciousness?
Realised you’ve flown…
Over the handlebars, kid

Bridge:
You think that I’m cruel now
Picking at your front teeth
But you’re the one who cried out for a “saviour”-of sorts-
And asked for some relief

You think I’m that cruel now
Picking at your front teeth
But you’re the one who screamed out for the “saviour”
And asked for some…

My thoughts go out to your mother
(…You must be proud…)
(…She must be proud…)
Heaven help you

Chorus:
You’ve pushed it too far
You’ve tried karma’s patience for too long
When will you regain control, consciousness?
Realised you’ve flown over(and out and control)

Over the handlebars, kid
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Comments: 10

edwardking [2008-05-16 08:19:01 +0000 UTC]

i'd love to hear this as a song, would song amazing

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HelpImALostCause In reply to edwardking [2008-05-16 12:25:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeh i suppose it would-some of my pieces are more song-like than others (structure and rhyming)-lol-

Others are me discussing a certain issue in a lyrical style

Personal I prefer the pieces that are more song-like but at the same time have a great theme around them-lol-

H!IALC

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LNIN9 [2008-05-03 04:45:59 +0000 UTC]

i am not so good on the musical aspect but i do like how it sounds and how it ends..

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HelpImALostCause In reply to LNIN9 [2008-05-06 08:33:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanx...what bit of it do u like and why? (twould help-lol-)

N don't worry abt the musical side-i don't actaully write them with music-jus in da style of lyrics and in a way so that they flow well and could pos be sang to songs-but to me it's more about the words and the meaning to be honest

-lol-

H!IALC

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disturbedchicken [2008-05-02 17:16:23 +0000 UTC]

i really like the end line it works sooooo well!

i like the bit with
"You think that I’m cruel now
Picking at your front teeth
But you’re the one who cried out for a “saviour”-of sorts-
And asked for some relief"

pretty cool ^^
well done baby!!

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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-05-06 08:23:11 +0000 UTC]

Yeh ppl seem 2 like da end(don't know why?-lol-)

So what's so good abt that bit?-lol-

Thank you v.much!

H!IALC

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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-05-09 17:54:52 +0000 UTC]

i'm not sure, maybe the realisation that its a child you're talking about - the emotions talked about are usually related with adults or teenagers, who are seen as adults, and saying the person is still a kid might change how the whole piece is read
or something lol
i dont know i like getting analysis of my work, not giving it lol

hey, i'm really proud of you ^^ you're work is getting so good!
i love you xxxx

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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-05-11 13:18:51 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you v. much sweety-more will be coming fairly soon

N the addition of "kid"-wasn't neccesarily employed to portray the person as a child(altho it can be) but more of as if the phrase was spoken from someone older and superior with more authority than that of the person,

But it doesn't matter either way-i like ppl to interpret my work in their own way jus bcoz I've written a peice with something in mind, doesn't mean that it is what it's definately about-lol-

[personaly i imagined the person as a young adult maybe late tenns-lol-]

Glad u like!

Love, love ,love u loads!!! XXXXXXXXXXXXX

H!IALC

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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-05-14 11:02:06 +0000 UTC]

lol sorry
i'm bad at analysis lol
i prefer other people making decisions about my work too lol

looooooove youuuuu

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HelpImALostCause [2008-05-02 14:29:16 +0000 UTC]

DO NOT TRY and fly over the handlebars of ur bike

You WILL die-lol-(well no)

H!IALC

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