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Published: 2008-09-05 12:21:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 208; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description Recovery

Verse:
Sit your head up, can you twitch your leg up?
It’s so sad
You’ve been stripped of all your colours
Dare to look at what you’ve regressed to
I’m just too scared of letting go of what I’ve loved...so much
See god mocking high (and mighty) far above

Pre:
It makes me feel like…
He’s making me feel like…

Chorus:
It’s so wrong
You didn’t deserve to be the one
Coz it’s just wrong
You were never meant to be the one, that is left broken

Verse:
I’d fix you, if I could
These tears don’t show the sorrow
How I miss you already
As your face is indifferent
And each day you keep on fading
Reminds me that you’ll never know…

Pre:
It makes me feel like…

Chorus:
It’s so wrong
You were never meant to be the one
Coz it’s just wrong
You didn’t deserve to be the one, that is left broken

I’d fix you, if I could

Bridge:
What is left?
You’re just a carcass in a bed
Doped up and kept alive
Victim to this twisted show
A vessel just to suffice
Our faint last glimmer of hope

And the mourning…(that morning)

Because I’m afraid
The person inside died long ago
Yet it still stares and it still groans
Should we put it out its misery?
Should we remember, that it’s no longer, her anymore
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Comments: 34

minniemeliorist [2008-11-25 23:05:04 +0000 UTC]

haven't been on in ages!!! and i am especially sorry for that.... Particularly like the bridge

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HelpImALostCause In reply to minniemeliorist [2008-11-27 15:38:45 +0000 UTC]

Yeh same as...things have got a bit busy here

Will try aand be on more often from now on-since things have sorted out a 'lil

Glad you like this piece, kinda sad really

The bridge is good i feel bcoz it raises some interesting questions and kinda brings the stark reality into context

H!IALC

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disturbedchicken [2008-09-05 20:02:55 +0000 UTC]

you've stopped putting the explanations on? :'(
aww...

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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-09-08 13:01:04 +0000 UTC]

Haha

As soon as they're gone ppl complain

Well if enough ppl want them back then i'll think about it

Jus ask me for an explaination if u want it

-lol-

H!IALC

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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-08 20:09:39 +0000 UTC]

isnt it enough that I want it? lol
ah well it just means i have to note you every time you put a piece up

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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-09-09 11:34:36 +0000 UTC]

No u can jus ask me here-lol-



H!IALC

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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-09 17:34:39 +0000 UTC]

so whats Buttercups amongst a Minefields about?
you pwomised.

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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-09-11 08:49:15 +0000 UTC]

Ah! Ask that one in the comment section of tht piece, this piece is a dif one

ok?

LOve you

H!IALC

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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-12 15:11:03 +0000 UTC]

>.< meanie.
fine i will.

i do love you

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HelpImALostCause In reply to disturbedchicken [2008-09-18 11:56:29 +0000 UTC]

I'm not being mean, I'll jus being picky-soz

I love you XXXXX

H!IALC

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disturbedchicken In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-18 17:39:26 +0000 UTC]

meanie lol

love you too :smooch hee

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WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-09-05 18:01:02 +0000 UTC]

i like this one especially

beautifull
it expresses exactly the feeling of your mind playing games, should we or shouldn't we?
and what if we do? will it be a big mistake? murder?
can we even say the word 'yes'?
you want to keep him alive, knowing there's no hope, yet still hoping against all reason.
inventually there's a big relief coz it was the best thing to do, but the truth of it being permanent is hammering upon your face

2 years ago this happened to a nephew of mine
after a month he was left to rest
thnx for writing this one

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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-09-08 13:06:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh...I'm sorry to hear that but I'm glad u really enjoyed it

A year ago my grandma died...I suppose i kinda drew inspiration from that, not from the emotion (because unforntunately although she was a great person i didnt really feel much when she went, i'd kinda prepared myself for it)

See for this piece i kinda wanted to play on the idea that when you're dying, you're entire person is stripped away. Both physically and in some cases mentally.

N in some sense that is sadder than the death. Bcoz if someone's been dying for a while, u don't want them to but u kinda expect them to go, but when ppl de-generate, its so sad bcoz u look at this person and then u rmbr what they used to be like and it just such a huge contrast.

Death is such a nasty thing

H!IALC

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WhereIsMyIcecream In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-08 13:12:53 +0000 UTC]

yup...

anyway it's a great poem

i had to laugh a bit during my lesson dutch today...
we'll get a cursus to read a poem
i felt like i was 10 when i saaw the assignments
with al u guys here on DA i don't think such a cursus can add something to my reading (and thinking) skills...

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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-09-09 11:31:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh right...

Erm what's a cursus?

Soz...

H!IALC

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WhereIsMyIcecream In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-09 15:53:14 +0000 UTC]

oopsss..
still can't talk english properly ^^

anyway, they're gonna try to learn us to read a poem.......
u probably think that should be fun....
but it's like we're attending primary school
'i saw a mouse inside the house' n stuff like that

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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-09-11 08:51:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh right...

I thought everyone could read poetry-its quite simple

Personally i prefer poetry which is similar 2 da stuff i write in that it doesn't necessarily rhyme n is more about the subject and languiage used, than the beat or rhyming

H!IALC

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WhereIsMyIcecream In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-11 10:27:31 +0000 UTC]

ow yeay, i agree.. but they don't think so...
crap >.<

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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-09-18 09:40:02 +0000 UTC]

That's teachers for u-always think they know best

-lol-

H!IALC

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WhereIsMyIcecream In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-18 15:56:33 +0000 UTC]

that's why a human wants to become teacher.....

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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-09-23 11:06:57 +0000 UTC]

Yeh to teach those 'lil shits a lesson-lol-

If i was a teacher i'd be strict enough but nice enough for the kids to like me

H!IALC

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WhereIsMyIcecream In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-25 05:32:24 +0000 UTC]

just be urself!
i've had a few teachers who behaved at school what i thought they'd behave at home...
n that's fun ^^

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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-09-26 11:47:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeh, if you're disliked as a teacher at skl, then ur class will be hell to u

H!IALC

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WhereIsMyIcecream In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-28 09:35:59 +0000 UTC]

hmmhmm...

but let's talk about some happier topics!

IT's WEEKEND!
no work, school n bugging ppl
did u do something last night?
i've been to a party n today i'm gonna make a comercial

an assignment for CKV (cultural artisan developement)
so that'll be fun

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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-09-30 12:05:01 +0000 UTC]

A reaaalll comercial?

Or a cheap skl alternative-lol-

Slept round my girlfriend's this weekend, was fun

-lol-

H!IALC

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WhereIsMyIcecream In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-09-30 15:53:17 +0000 UTC]

well,, it's a school assignment
but that doesn't mean it's cheap does it?

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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-10-02 10:10:53 +0000 UTC]

But how proffessional is it?

H!IALC

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WhereIsMyIcecream In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-10-02 10:45:08 +0000 UTC]

not.... ^^

we ( i ) just set up some scenes.. n that what we'll play..
but compared with others ours might be rlly good

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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-10-23 12:09:18 +0000 UTC]

KL sounds like a laugh

H!IALC

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WhereIsMyIcecream In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-10-24 18:37:55 +0000 UTC]

i'm always laughing (except when i'm not) ^^
it isn't finished yet, but some classmates already came up with a commercial.. rlly funny...

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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2008-12-18 11:57:03 +0000 UTC]

They better be really good jokes otherwise it might suck-lol-

Gd luck wth it

Anchorman Hielke-lol-

H!IALC

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WhereIsMyIcecream In reply to HelpImALostCause [2008-12-18 19:33:53 +0000 UTC]

it flopped
my 'crew' blew it.... not that they played their roles bad... the didn't play any role at all

so i made a poster...... :$

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HelpImALostCause In reply to WhereIsMyIcecream [2009-01-08 16:32:28 +0000 UTC]

I bet the poster was epic!

-lol-



H!IALC

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WhereIsMyIcecream In reply to HelpImALostCause [2009-01-12 17:03:25 +0000 UTC]

NOT!! ^^
but eah, it was at least something

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