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HelpImALostCause — Walking In Slow Motion
Published: 2008-06-10 16:46:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 160; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Walking in Slow MotionVerse:
I guess I just sit down
I guess I pass out
Close my eyes and disappear
Sew up my lips
No need to speak no more
Since the world has greyed: dried up-all turned, to ash…
Chorus:
Snow down
Snow down on me
Conceal the mistakes I have made-to you
(Don’t) Slow down
Slow down for me
You didn’t take time before!
Why should you now?
Verse:
I guess I just lay down
In the road this time
Maybe someone will recognise my existence (resistance)
After death, after I’m gripped by the grave
An artist’s story in glory of fame
Since the world has greyed and dried up-all turned, to ash…
Chorus:
Snow down
Snow down on me
Conceal the mistakes I have made-to you (I’m sorry)
(Don’t) Slow down
Slow down for me
You didn’t take time before
Why should you, now that I lie upon this floor
-completely motionless-
Bridge:
Hate the ground that which I tread
You can smile/laugh maybe when I’m dead
And carry on, carry on
Hide and seek your way through your life
Ignore the cries of your cardboard child
And carry on, do you think that I could carry on?
Sleep
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Comments: 11
THIS ONE IS BRILLIANT!!!! for some reason i absolutley love it.....
Chorus:
Snow down
Snow down on me
Conceal the mistakes I have made-to you
(Don’t) Slow down
Slow down for me
You didn’t take time before!
Why should you now? (<--- i think this line should disappear, because "You didn't take time before!" seems like a powerful stance to have before moving on. It's a definative point, and the questioning afterward makes it less strong)
That is my only critique....the rest is brilliant
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Yeh thanx, citicism is ALWAYS gd, I may not agree with you, but I WILL listen to you
I kinda wrote it in mind that they'd be a gap, between: "You didn’t take time before!" and "Why should you now?"
Its kind of an after note after the chorus-lol-
Tho it may jus be me being lazy, see...I wrote the longer chorus first so, this was more of an alteration of it-lol-
Glad you love it tho, "slowly you will love ALL my work ahahahahahaha" (creepy voice)-lol-
soz...
H!IALC
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good job! really love ur lyrics, liked this one better than sinner's paradise though . . .
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Yeh I have to agree with you on that, Sinner's paradise is good, but this one's better.
I jus enjoyed writing "SP" and liked some of its lines but i don't think it was overall as rounded as this one, but I felt it was good enough to put online.
The title "SINNER's PARADISE" is awesome tho
U checked out any of my other new pieces?
H!IALC
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yep! i really like fall through the silver lining!
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Kl so...WHAT DA HELL R U WRITING THAT COMMENT HERE FOR!!!-lol-
Soz...jus messing around-lol-
H!IALC
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you know what? i. . .i have no fucking clue. . .
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Hehe-soz...wrong piece-aw well...makes my comments on this piece rocket-lol-
H!IALC
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i like the feeling of the winter - it beings a kind of sharpness to the gorier imagery in the piece.
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Yeh winter IS beautiful but it is also a time of decay and death.
I felt the image of someone alone in the snow is one that is quite sad n I liked it.
I also liked the idea that in this piece, maybe it ISN'T snowing, but the character is so desperate that they wish it WAS snowing
-lol-...well no
H!IALC
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