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hemphisisdragon In reply to jade-raine [2006-08-23 02:19:31 +0000 UTC]

oh, if you want to read the REAL fic (the one on here is bogus) then go to this [link]

P.S. Thanks for the comment! oh, and it might start out a little odd, but it gets better!

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jade-raine In reply to hemphisisdragon [2006-08-24 02:57:01 +0000 UTC]

Omigosh just read it!
YOU ARE GOD!
OK maybe not that, but you are certainly an exellent writer.
Now Robin can teach Raven how his gadgets work.
She might not get it, and then he'll have to show her.
When demonstrating the grappling hook thingy, he can sort of grab her around the waist and.... yeah...
Just update soon.
*bows at you*

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hemphisisdragon In reply to jade-raine [2006-08-24 11:57:22 +0000 UTC]

Awww... Thankyou!
Wow, never thought about that, good idea! lol
Anyway, I'll probably have the next chapter up by today or tomorrow.

Thanks again!

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jade-raine In reply to hemphisisdragon [2006-09-04 18:02:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh, you're quite welcome.
Yay for updates!
*decides to check*

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jade-raine In reply to jade-raine [2006-09-04 18:10:47 +0000 UTC]

*comes back from checking*
Hah!
I swear I was, like, gloating the whole time. Seriously. I think that the writing could be smoothed out a little, and I found a spelling error or two, but other then that it was simply FANTSTIC!!!!
Though I have to say that I was grinning and snickering alternatingly at some of the diologue.
Just keep up the great story! *can't wait for more updates*

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hemphisisdragon In reply to DBZMSI [2005-09-17 23:09:45 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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