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henshell — Immortal Sun by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-09-18 23:35:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 308; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Description Immortal Sun
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She is beauty, unbearable
Roaming her land freely
From day to night she delivers light

She is life, prospering
Puts a start to an end
From ocean to land she is praised

She holds radiance still expanding
Protected from a seeking eye
From life to death she is wanted

She is a goddess, almighty
A queen unintelligible
From earth to heavens she guides mortals

No man can understand her
Way she hides and still appears
Way her warmth is felt not captured
She is the immortal sun
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Comments: 5

msklystron [2008-09-20 14:16:22 +0000 UTC]

Lovely!

~chugglepuff is the best editor.

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henshell In reply to msklystron [2008-09-20 15:02:38 +0000 UTC]

Tell me about it. do you know her? I hate to keep bothering her with my poems but she doesn't mind. Can you edit?

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msklystron In reply to henshell [2008-09-20 16:53:21 +0000 UTC]

~chugglepuff edits my stuff too. I edit, but I'm not as good as she is and even slower at getting through my deviant watch. However, I'm qualified to crit visual art, as I teach it.

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henshell In reply to msklystron [2008-09-20 18:41:42 +0000 UTC]

you do! where?

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msklystron In reply to henshell [2008-09-20 19:00:46 +0000 UTC]

At community centres. I do it part-time and teach kids and adults.

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