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Published: 2011-08-17 00:20:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 614; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 28
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Severus Snape, whats not to love? He's got the looks, the voice, the mystery, and a heart plated with steal but filled with love. He is the bravest man I ever knew.I'd love feedback. XD
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I love the face and the hair and the expression. The picture is simply perfect!
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Woah, you are a great artist! Many people(Like me) would kill for this talent. As for feedback(From an amateur? Possible correct?). Look at the left eye. The pupil seems to be in it's own world, making Severus seem out of focus or even mentally retarded. That's all I can say for now.
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Why thank you. I'll try to fix that eye, it must have gotten out of wack on my scanner(its really old.)
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Hmm, that may be it, I don't have a scanner, I have to take pictures of my artwork with my iPhone then send it to myself then download fit on the computer then upload XD
I can't wait to see it fixed. I always see such great art and then one detail puts me off.
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After looking at it and the reference photo, I think it's just a matter of 'star' size, mine are just a tad smaller.
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Hmmm, I had no idea what you just said.
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the white dots in the eyes are sometimes referred to as 'stars'. The ones in the left eye are slightly smaller, and I admit a little off.
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Hmmm, what about the cornea(Most likely wrong XD)
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