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Tries writing a critique.
I don't know anything about DHMIS so I guess I'll look at this without watching the videooo
I like the concept and design of the outfit however, I think the coloring can be a bit better since the hair is layered and I suggest shadows (ohwelldontmindme). The overall look of the piece kind of looks dull at the bottom and flat but just cause it's flat doesn't mean it looks bad LOLOLOL 8)
So yeah, this could still be improved like shadowing the black and white parts or somethingggg
oh AND ANOTHER THING
It's very clean and I hope it'll be kept that way since it's traditional art.
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the no shadow thing was kinda on purpose but I suppose it doesn't look nice without it so okay thanks olololol
and the dress is supposed to look kinda... bland
and as a notepad then I made it black, white and gray
and also emphisizing the hair
and wow it's clean??? thanks?
lol thanks for critiquing
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I'm not sure how to write a critique, but I'll try anyway.
The art is very nice, I mean like the colors are simple on the clothes, but then emphasised on the hair which was a very good technique. I like how the clothes look and stuff, but I believe the clothes on the notepad of DHMIS has more stuff, like an orange and sticks. But I believe on the bottom are the sticks. Also the sticks don't look like they're brown, they look like they're black. I also believe the neck and legs of the human notepad are black. But overall, good job.
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Hmm.
About the coloring thing... Thanks, I tried to emphasize that.
The dress... I tried to make it simple, but now that I think about it, naw. It's not the notebook style, I suppose. But it's my design too, so I don't agree too much with the neck and legs thing.
And the sticks aren't supposed to be brown. The style is really like that. As a notepad, its dress is white, black and gray.
But thanks.
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Hm, I agree with your style... It really is original.
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Yeah, thanks, let's get CREATIVE!
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<--- WOOOOOW LOOK AT DIS ART O___O
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you kept singing it in chat tho >.>
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'Cause it's so catchy. >.>
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